| Reviews for Down by the Wayside |
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sumie chapter 7 . 11/4/2015 Please continue this, I love evetythabout this fix so much. Its left a big hole in my brain every other Cleon fic I've ever read can't fill. |
LucAri chapter 7 . 11/5/2014 Please keep going! You have me hanged here T-T Its so beautiful written |
hachi.kitty chapter 7 . 11/9/2013 Super awesome story. Can't wait for an update. :) |
SinGrin chapter 7 . 8/15/2013 Chapter eight? An epilogue? I'm anxious to read how everything turns out. :) I'm loving this story. |
SinGrin chapter 1 . 8/15/2013 I like this. I'm just going to keep on reading. |
Change of Heart-Good and Evil chapter 1 . 7/31/2013 Update soon please! I'm constantly hoping to see and update! |
keiko-uchiha chapter 7 . 7/21/2013 I love when Cloud encounters Leon at the airport and on the plane. I also love how you wrote Leon and Cloud. But poor Cloud though. I really love your story. I look forward to the next chapter. |
xXKaidynXx chapter 7 . 6/11/2013 I love this story. I want to see how Cloud and Leon's relationship play out. And I love how you've incorporated everything Kingdom Hearts into this story, and final fantasy VII. I hope Vincent Valentine, Red XIII, Barrett, and Cid make an appearance along with some other Final Fantasy characters. |
Ready09Sette chapter 7 . 6/10/2013 Cloud! How could you?! You left poor Leon alone! Great story by the way! :D I'm hoping Cloud's dominating really... I think it's cute that way! |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/10/2013 Yay, a new chapter! :D I really like how you've portrayed Cloud and Leon. Keep it up. :3 |
mudkipluvr4ever chapter 7 . 5/4/2013 Great job, I really liked it! Please update soon! |
Cleonhart chapter 7 . 5/3/2013 I love this so far, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
3waypetal chapter 7 . 4/29/2013 Awww! That was so cute! Stupid Cloud, how dare he leave Leon there? Leon is perfect for him. :) Amazing job, this chapter is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Windform chapter 7 . 4/28/2013 So Cloud's finally made up his mind. Hopefully he'll be able to catch up to Leon. |
Out-of-Character217 chapter 7 . 4/23/2013 Oh, why haven't I read this before? I've seen it a few times, tucked away in the 'maybe' plie while I searched for sutible cleon to keep me amused. Now I wish I'd read this sooner. It's warm and funny, competantly written but for a few spelling errors and a turn of phrase here and there that didn't quite make sense. But on the whole this is lovely and it fills me with the warm and fuzzy feels that I love so much. A beta reader would be your best bet. Just to tidy up those little mistakes and make this brilliant. What I loved most about this though, was the humour. You've given Cloud a dimention that is hard to portray and is something that I have great trouble with. I'm envious of you! Cloud and Leon's interaction is simply adorable! I can't wait to read more. |