NOOOOOOOO

I just binged this in 2 days (very tired now)
Kg dude... I gotta know I gotta know What HAPPENS NEXT .

P.s. Been going through your works DAMB GOOD SHIT SIR DAMB GOOD SHIT ️

Gonna give this a read but adopted by Kurenai and doesnt end up with Hinata? Huh...

Wow u left me in suspense there and idk what to say but hope u contiune this chapter.

ahahaha love the opening note!

If anyone is still interested in this story I have adopted it. Come to my profile if you want to continue to read it.

Some people have been complaining about this chapter being "filler-like." But to be honest, who wants to read fighting all the fucking time? No, I want to see characterization; I don't want to see writers rushing to Graduation, or even Chunin Exams.

10/10 Top Memes on the HU:A TFS reference. It's sad it's over now :'(

*crys* WHAT HAVE YOU UNLEASHED

Jūken/Gentle Fist**

Sorry seeing it typed differently bugged me.

I sit and wait with baited breath for more. I hope you find a new computer and my the sweet, sweet nectar that is cream soda keeps your inner light shining brightly.

SSRank Jutsu: Talk no Jutsu

I have a 21' cock

BZZZZZ continuity error. you just had naruto say he didnt know any fire style techniques. yet in several of the previous chapters he has repeatedly used fire style techniques. so thus his statement to Tenka about not knowing any fire style techniques is false.

another continuity error, you mentioned in a previous chapter that Manda was no longer the boss summon of the snake clan. meaning that naruto couldnt summon him even IF he wanted to. Manda is the sole summon of Pedo-Maru. thus the snake clan would have a new boss other then Manda.

um... quick point to mention. at the beginning of the second stage of the chuunin exams, when naruto is showing tenten his kodachi, her dialogue suggests it is the very first time they have met... yet you had her and naruto interact in the previous chapters like they have known each other for years. especially when naruto had the weapons of the Kumo team repaired and upgraded with the metal from the land of iron.

so, while minor... this is a sizable plot hole. even IF this fic is on hiatus, you might want to look into fixing that, and a few others i have noticed as the fic progressed.

none of them are particularly major in the grand scheme of things, but they do represent sizable continuity errors, and thus shift the entire plot in minor but significant ways.

just saying.