Will you finish this? Please tell me you didn't abandon it! I need to know what's happening to him! Is he ill? Is he under a spell?

Hope to read more of this some time in the future

Why can't people write a good BW/L story without turning Loki into a big pussy?

That was really good. I'm a little confused about the whole double vision thingy but I guess that was the point. Keep writing and update fast! I can't wait to read more. :)

F*********CCCCCCKKKKKK... I need to let the info sink in for a minute... That sent cold shivers down my spine. Great story. :)

i love this chapter. tho the whole dream seems a bit like foreshadowing... which ends with loki captured. can't wait for more!

Wow this was really good :) I'm so excited to read more!

I'm so excited to see another chapter of this story! :)

When I saw that this story had been updated, it totally made my day. I was starting to think that you had abandoned it.

this is awesome!

Yay more BlackFrost shipping- and considerably in character- Loki pulls a stunt and Nat disappears like only a spy can! I can't wait for more :)

Nine chapters in and I still don't know how to feel about said situation. I'm still curious though- you never explained how she was impregnated. She doesn't recall -urm- sleeping with him.

well mortal,this story is intruging! i am looking forward to how it ends and demand that the next chapter is written soon! congratualations on having such a imaginitive mind. goodbye mortal.

This story is great, I love it! Please update soon. :)

I gotta say, I'm loving your story! And I don't even ship Loki & Natasha. It's that good. Keep it up!

Oh my lord this is so good! It is a great plot and is pretty well written! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D