I love your writing, specifically in the third chapter. You have Tony's voice pretty down-pat if I do say so myself.

Yeah, this story's been around for a while, but I just came across it. Very well done, and deserves to be continued—perhaps in a sequel? I do like the way you have given Tony and Clint a common experience to overcome. Tony's time in the cave in Afghanistan where he was being tortured was no walk in the park, either. Thanks for writing and sharing!

I enjoyed this! It was fun to read and wow just so good

Nice!

"Hopefully I did it Justice" You did more than do this justice! This was absolutely heart wrenching, and I had no idea which direction it was going to go in, and if I should cry or not!
Thanks for the amazing story!

Really sass one story great job super well written loved it

Wow awesome Job really great chapter :) super well written

What no they can't do that that's not fair grata job really good

Interesting story. I wasn't expecting the angle, but I liked it.
Good job!
God Bless,
SW

This was a great story, although it did make me sad.

"Occupational hazard" xD you have to watch How to Train Your Dragon.

A perfect combination of action and dialogue that moved the story right along. Also, the characters acted as I feel they normally would, you kept them true to themselves and that's a major role when writing kickass stories. Keep writing!

This story was great, I love the Tony/Clint friendship.
You wrote the characters really well, I'm just going to work my way through your Avengers stories.
Well done!

Enjoyed your story, look forward to reading more of your work.

Great story. I'm really interested in a sequel or a follow up ;)

You made me smile! :-)