This story has potential and I admit, the pairing IS rare, however there's several flaws.

1. Arrancars do not seem to hold major emotions like love and hate, they have bloodlust and respect, but none have shown actual romantic interests in anyone. While you have made both characters reincarnated into humans, it means they would basically be starting over like a child, but unlike a child, they would not have the environment of parents to teach them emotions, which is where children pick up their emotions, hence why doting and loving parents typically have happy cheerful children while neglectful parents have either delinquent or impassive children. The two Arrancar are learning all this on their own so it would be strange for them to develop feelings quickly. In this regard your past notes of this being an overused fanfic troupe holds true, it never made sense to me why Naruto would be reborn as a Hollow and seek revenge, as a Hollow any feelings of vengeance he had would have died, the only one that makes sense would be him being Grimmjow because Grim doesn't give a fuck about revenge, he just wants to wreck shit, same with Nnoitra and Yami.

2. A BIG IF, but IF Harribel WAS in a relationship, I would honestly see her as a lesbian. One she surrounds herself with a female Faction, two she seems to hold men in either apathy or outright disdain, and two if she were in a past life Naruto, then more than likely she would inherit Naruto's attraction for women. I honestly HATE stories that portray Naruto being turned into a girl and all of a sudden he goes from wanting pussy to wanting dick, Fanfic used to be OVERRUN with stories where Naruto spent his whole life attracted to females then by some mishap he becomes 'Naruko' either because he had always been a girl in disguise, the Orioke no Jutsu goes wrong and traps him in his girl form, or some outside force turns him into a girl and in 99% of those stories he not only goes "Hmmm, I don't like tits and pussies anymore, I'm a girl now, so I must chase dicks" but he ends up as Sasuke's pet bitch in most of them and it honestly irks me. I mean I'm a guy and honestly I'm saying WTF when everyone acts like just because someone has a pussy they have to have a dick in it, regardless if said person was into the other sex for YEARS before hand.

There was no reason to explain the fucking afterlife to a ninja that knew they were hiding something. They could've easily come up with literally anything else & it would be more believable even with the "proof" of a scary mask.

FUCK NO NARUTO IS A GUY NOT A CHICK

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It's alright we understand.

Hey, you kinda wrote "Sabaku no Temari" twice up there so you should try fixing that. No, this isn't hate, I'm just pointing stuff out cause I have a bit of a case of OCD. Other than that, I love this story! It has so much potential and I hope you keep updating!

Hmmm sudden urge to destroy and kill...

Tia x ggio?

Nice

Take care man loved your storys

Okay, the second is russian for 'lava rock' so I'm guessing Roshi.
The first one is Persian for Crystal Sound, so that has to be Guren.

I didn't know that about those voice actors. Shocking. O_O

Johnny Yong Bosch also the voice of Renton Thurston from Eureka Seven, Lelouch Vi Britannia from Code Geass, Nero from DMC 4, and the best freaking Anime character EVER Vash the F*****g Stampede from Trigun! Too bad his acting sucked, then again all Power Rangers suck. Like the story, if you rewrite it or return to it, you should make it a little more one sided, while I applaud you for giving the villains a fighting stance, the sad truth is none of the Akatsuki could stand up to the Espada, I'm pretty sure even Grimmjow and Nnoitra could kill Madara and Obito without any problems, Ulquiorra, Harribel, Barrigan, and Starrk are no contest, they could after all destroy an entire village with a single Cero, especially Ulquiorra's Cero he used on Ichigo. Either way still good, don't like the hateful Hinata but I'm fine with the break away from him returning FOR Hinata, I just find it more believable she could move on with her life rather than despising Naruto as the Nine-Tails.

I'm sorry to hear that and hope things improve for you. Your stories have been amongst the few to either have a good deal of originality to them or truly make it your own. If these are a reflection of your spark as a person then you truly deserve better in your life and the right to a break/retire from writing. Thank you for the consideration of letting us know and not just leaving us wondering.

to bad you make santa very sad