Dammmnnn. I got linked her from an AO3 comment on a different fic about Law using his powers for selfcest, with little warning...comparitivley this was HEAVY.

Your writing is so fluid and you are so descriptive and graphic with everything. It's hard to tell where my heart is beating from fear or from morbid curiosity as to where things will go. Given where canon ended up with Kidd, I just feel bad for him. To go from this to that...(not being specific to avoid spoiling too much of Wano)...ooof. Great writing, even if it's super disturbing too.

I really hope for a sequel. I really do. It's amazing. I never thought I would enjoy this side of Law, but I do! It's really well written! Thanks for writing!

AHHH this is omg AMAZING even though I really thought I preferred kid dominating but LAW this is just everything I ever imagined and everything that I hadn't
Delightfully wicked and moral-less crazy but too plausible hell the bowling ball was a perfect touch
how am I supposed to face law in the anime now fuck can't look at him with a straight eye anymore

So I'm not the only thing who thinks weird stuff with devil fruit powers... sweeet. But seriously, this entire layout was just amazing. I love the dynamics! And, as always, I absolutely adore your writing. 3

This is soooo sick i'm at a loss of words! :O awesome though, but i dunno what to think of it LOL

downright amazing

I really like it...you did a fabulous job of getting into Law's head. It takes skill to be able to do that.
You inspire me! xD
-SITC

Haha! That is a very good moral, very good. I love how dark Law is in this! It was great! :D

Holy shit dude... Never would of thought I'd be reading something like this...AND ENJOY THE WHOLE THING! Damn, this fic was odd, slightly disturbing, but ever so intriguing! Not to mention that you are a god with words and can describe any situation beautifully! I love your writing and I will continue to do so but, I can't help but feel sorry for Kidd, poor guy! All he wanted was to find some shelter!XD

Lovely, just lovely. Hope you can pass your exam and everything :) A really wonderful story, yet again I want to say that the way Law and Kidd work together is simply magnificent. I hope that none of your exquisive stories will be deleted. I hope I'm not bothering you or anything, but please when you find the time and the energy, then I would really like a successor to this wonderful story :D

AWESOME DARK LAW! :D lusty as well! LOL

I haven't read this yet, I admit, because I'm absolutely not in the mood for Darkish right now. However, I saw Aivelin's tribute to this story and... Woooaah! O_o Hope to read this soon.

lmfao Hahaha, poor Kid. XD I love your sadistic Law.

"Don't barge into people's vacation houses." Pffft, yeah, especially when said vacation house's owner is one Trafalgar Law. XDD

The part about Law chopping off his family jewels reminded me of this fanart I saw on dA the other day that had me choking on laughter, not sure if you've seen it before:

.com (slash) art (slash) One-piece-Keep-Your-Jewels-Close-291660555?qboost%3Apopular%20trafalgar%20law%20eustass%20kid&qo98

I hope your stories don't get axed by FFN! I hadn't known about An Archive of Our Own, but I'll be looking into it just in case FFN completely goes over it.

This was dark and twisted and I loved it! Oh the fun sex Law can have.