Reviews for Breakthrough
MewWinx96 chapter 13 . 4/11/2019
Hi! I just wanted to say that I've enjoyed this story and I hope that it someday continues! :)
Auto Cerebral Star chapter 13 . 6/30/2018
"I have a surprise for you. You'll have to wait to find out!"
Looks like we'll be waiting a LONG time...
MandalorianPirate chapter 13 . 3/2/2017
Noooo! Please continue! Please please please! I love this story! :-)
Crescental chapter 9 . 9/19/2014
Hah! I knew it was Peter. I love Spider-man cameos :)
Before I read this story, I felt neutral about Loki, but now I love him :D
I know it's been a long time since you updated, but I hope you haven't forgotten completely about it and update ;)
Procrastinator12 chapter 9 . 6/19/2014
Loving this story so far and just had to leave a review to thank you for Parker's cameo! That was just too perfect.
Rehabilitated Sith chapter 13 . 6/18/2014
2 yearsssssssssssssss? Where's the rest?
Rehabilitated Sith chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
never good when they BOTH grin.
Moo-cow300 chapter 13 . 1/5/2014
Here I am, at 3:45 in the morning, not able to stop reading. Thanks.
All kidding aside, though, fantastic storyline you've concocted there. Great read, too. I hope you find the time and, I suppose, the proper imaginative juices to continue the story. I can't wait until the next chapter (or, heaven forbid, the rest of the fic) to be posted!
Gamma Cavy chapter 12 . 12/15/2013
'Don't tell Thor, he'll be jealous' that is such a Loki thing to say.
Autumn Fire Spirit Yggdrasil chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
DUN DUN DUN
Guest chapter 13 . 9/18/2013
Nice story! I really enjoyed the Loki/Tony developments here, and how Loki interacts with the whole team in general. You did a really good job at showing Loki's slow change in attitude towards the mortals and working with them. I also loved the angsty bits, if you can call them that, like the references to Loki's punishment and how he felt and thought about Asgard and the people he used to call family and friends. What I also really liked was that you used a modified Chitauri as the bad guy. I've never seen that in a fic before, and it's nice to something novel like that. Makes for good suspense, difficulties in predicting what's going to happen next and just generally a better story.

So! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Will the Avengers be successful at preventing the explosive(s) from exploding? And will Selvig and Jane be save or will the Chitauri get its hands on them? And how long will it take before realizes who this Thanos is that is behind everything? And how will he react once he finds out? I look forward to finding out.
1412 karasu chapter 13 . 9/7/2013
Ahhh please update, this is so good!
(And is also one of the few fics in which Tony hasn't had a falling-out with Pepper for some inexplicable reason.)
TheUndefeatable chapter 13 . 7/18/2013
It was very exciting! But, you didn't leave this story, did you? you hadn't updated in near ten month! Update soooooon, I want to see what happen next!
d1x1lady chapter 13 . 7/2/2013
This is a fantastic story and I can't wait to read more of your work. Love it!
vincent1875 chapter 13 . 5/4/2013
Good story so far. As long as it doesn't suddenly turn to romance between Stark and Loki I'll probably keep enjoying it.
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