WELL, I THINK YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE GOT ROSE EXPLELLED. I'm not trying to be mean or anyting, its just that Rose probably just should have realised her mistakes. Also, can Lily's family find out she's dation scorp? I LOVE this story!

Mango where r though next chp pending forever

(So I used to leave comments as Anon, but since this comment thing has gotten weirder, here I am all logged in).

I liked Rose's exit. It was ballsy and she went out in a flame of glory as is the Weasley way.

I'm assuming things are going to focus more on the Lily/Scorpius angle more now that Rose has gone.

Bring forth the Draco Malfoy! :D

Right, exam season finished so I'm finally able to read and review the four previous chapters... I loved them! They were awesome- I loved the fluffy and beautifuly written romance between Lily and Scor and how you wrote Rose's breakdown was very realistic. But what lead to Rose's downward spiral, was it just the pressure? Sorry the review was so long! :)

I teared up a little D': Poor Rose. I thought she was gonna commit suicide though so I guess that's a bit better.

Rose's exit was PERFECT! Completing her dream of being a muggle. That was very nice. I still don't know how to describe this chapter. It's just AWESOME. I feel so lighthearted after this. It's like... I don't know. It's just has a warm feeling after you read it. This is like one of the chapters that are inspirational. Ones, that teach us something. For example, the last two or three lines, that Scorpius taught Lily optimism. He showed her how to look at things at a better perspective. I would really appreciate you do more chapters like this. Less dialogues, not that I don't like dialogues, anyways, more of a third person perspective, since I really think it's nice. You also mentioned a part where Draco comes in. From what I remember you said that Draco was like a pureblood-obssesed, antic person, right? So just like Lucius in a way. Anyway, UPDATE!

Yay! Not a cliff but a good way to get rid of her.

Great chapter

(Sniff, sniff) I feel so badly for Rose, and her parents. Ron and Hermione must be devastated, while Hugo must be getting even more pressure than Lily at school. This is heavy angst.

Great update! Totes didn't expect that exit-type from Rose...But it was really good. It worked

good exit

So, the bad Draco will show up soon? I love Hugo, maybe one day my son will be as nice as he... please mango, end my suffering and update more...

I'm not at all bored with this. Lily and Scor are so cute although Al is prob my fave character still. he's just so different from how i imagine him. Rose is really annoying me and it is a shame (I usually like Rose). She really needs to look at what she has in her life and change her thought processes.

looking forward to seeing how this story progresses

Drop rose of a nice cliff she is a pest

Awesme update! :)

So excited Rose is taking a stage left out, haha

Nooo! Why would you think that? I loved today's chapter! I'm really bad at explaining, but there's the kind of fluff that makes you feel warm and fuzzy and there's the kind that makes you go, 'Stop. Get a room.' I feel all warm and fuzzy right now.

I like that Lily and Scorp are talking about things before they become issues for major angst.

On a different note though, pure-blood Draco sounds interesting. And there's more? Wee!

We were talking about Al, but Hugo's fab too!