Man this was probably written years ago when you were younger and a lot less expericed, so I forgive how bad this fic is. It is horrendous and messy, I kept on reading out of morbid curiosity, but I don't think I can anymore.

IM TELLING YOU NOT TO MAKE LISSANA A BITCH! SHE'S A NICE PERSON IT'S JUST THAT SHE GETS IN THE WAY OF THE NALU SHIP SO EVERYONE HATES HER!

And I knew that lissana was the one who took the amulet.…

If lissana comes back as a Bitch and takes Natsu away from Lucy I'm going to stop reading.…

Go to where?! I can't see it! Please where should we be going to,to read these amazing stories?! Reply!

Wait….DOES LUCY HAVE ALL HER KEYS FROM THE BEGINNING OF THE FAIRY TAIL SHOW?

You spelled Lucy's last name wrong…it's Lucy Heartfilia…but it's still cool

That Author's Note tho

Wow Lucy must be really happy!

I died...

Noooooooo I have to know if she gives up Theives Guild for Fairy Tail and Natsu! You can't end there I will die! x-x

Make more pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeee! ️️️️

I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSSS

It's good. I wanna keep reading. Few grammatical errors, such as skipping from present to past tense nouns. Also I don't think natsu would be the type of person to think 'gosh', given that he occasionally uses the words 'bitches' 'tits' 'shit' and 'fuck' in the manga. Sorry for profanities.

didn't Lucy put a dresser behind her door so that no one could get in?...

Oh don't worry Happy I want to see them make babies too...