Very nice story! Well crafted. Believable. Good dialogue. Nice handling of Mycroft especially.

Lol ignore that last review that was for a different story! This one is great too! Love John whump!

Oh please please please do the next chapter! At least a wrap up :( I'm a sucker for Dean whump and your story is one of the best I've found recently!

Wonderful! !

Wow, this was really quite something- daaang, Sherlock was in deep doodoo. ...but I was sure there was some plan wrapped up in there. i wasn't nervous. not me. nope. xD ahaha

anyway, neat fic here. pfft. Moriarty's plans didn't really go down the way he hoped, did they. :P

NYAHHHRRRGGGHHHHGSDEJDEIPNV

Well, I wonder what Mycroft's weakness is?
HNNNN. How's sherlock gonna get out of this!?sjvl

This was an amazing story, awesome job!

Wow...intense ride!

great story.
I like this protocol thing. And Sherlock going on a killing spree is kind of funny
cheers
yuura

this is really good :)

Whoa. Intense and very believable IMO. I do think Sherlock would be just this, well insane if something happened to people he cared for. I mean he jumped off a building at the end of season two to protect three of them; the better question would probably be what wouldn't he do? I know the story is a year old but anyhow, kudos you did a fantastic job.

WHAT OMG

I've enjoyed the whole story very much. I can totally see Sherlock doing that, going all sociopath-on-the-warpath to get justice no matter the consequences. I loved his reaction as a whole to John getting shot. Wonderful job keeping everybody in-character and letting us know what's going on in the scenes without actually showing us the all the blood and gore.

I liked it... Good job.

Wow, I can definitely picture Sherlock hellbent on revenge- it scares me to a degree. . I LOVE YOUR STORY by the way, thank you for writing this up. :D