| Reviews for JAIL TAG! part 1 |
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Meri7 chapter 1 . 1/22/2019 cute :) |
Hey chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 Hey It was hilarious Please continue ! |
Sabrina chapter 1 . 1/31/2015 please update soon! |
Children of Light chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 I played something like that in school! Although it stopped halfway when 2 boys took things to seriously and one of them ended up with a broken nose... |
TheKazemaruSiblings chapter 1 . 6/5/2012 Isabella: *doging the book of her brother* NEVER Kazemaru:*aims again* REVISE Isabella: NEVER...well atleast let me review first Kazemaru: XD it was pretty funny Isabella: *squeel* oOo how will win...I think Kayria team will Kazemaru: I bet were gonna catch Krino and Shindo next! Isabella: I read the next bit later but for now I need to doge...I mean "start revising" Kazemaru:*aims book at Isabella's head* REVISE Isabella: *doges and runs* NEVER Kazemaru:*chases her really fast* REVISE Isa:NO! |
RyuuseiDragonPenguin chapter 1 . 6/5/2012 This was really funny, the humor is really outstanding, making people laugh a LOT but not overdone until the characters are OOC. In fact, I congratulate you two for managing to keep the characters so IC! Just one thing: Isn't there a rule about not posting chapters/ parts as a different fic? Maybe you should upload the part 2 here as a second chapter. Other than that, really priceless humor! Excellent collab! |
AdventureWriter28 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012 Please update soon XD Im guessing that Kariya's gonna win! Too bad you already made Ichino and Aoyama lose _ |
HIATUS-ING chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 waii this is so fun! for me.. 1 2 and 6 XP |
xXRoyal Mai and Miki HimeXx chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 Mai: WHOA JAIL TAG HAVEN'T PLAYED FOR THREE YEARS! AMAZING COLLAB GUYS! Lina: Hard to believe Cuz is letting me review... Mai: So you don't- Lina: oh Whar I mean is This is really funny! Pleasemake more! Mai: what she said! Wow you Guys are really good and Nice Idea! I just simply Love this! Lina: Awesome food fight scene we both imagined it and we were laughing our heads off XD okay so our guesses are 2,3,and 6 Hoep they are right! Mai and Lina: Anyways Hope to see more! Ganbatte ne JA NE! X3 |
Era-Basilisk chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 Ooo Make part 2 soon! I guess...Team 2! Only need to guess one team, right? |
not-gonna-be-here-bye-bye-sayo chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 Starlite, YuMi, and Jess: *in a huddle* Star: Kariya never loses... he's all flexible Lite: But Kirino's adorable! Yuki: And why does that matter? Lite: You never hurt the cute... and he's got The Mist so no one can touch him Yuki: Hamano... he seems pretty confident, confidence works out Mina: Yukimura is awesome Lite: We aren't talking about 'it's' Mina: Then Shinsuke, his jumping power is incredible, he can hide in tall trees Jess: In my opinion, Tenma! Starlite and YuMi: *sweatdrop* Jess: He's fast, got a keshin, can he do Agressive Beat? No mind as long as he has the similar, Soyokaze Step Star: So in conclusion, every team except Kariya's will lose! Yuki: Where'd you get that ide- Star: And Shindou's team will lose first... 'cos Shindou's on it! Mina: Wouldn't it be a team with only Forward Hissatsus 'cos they can't hit people with the b- Star: So Masaki's gonna win! Lite, YuMi, and Jess: No one but you agreed to that Star: But I matter the most! Lite, YuMi, and Jess: WAIT A- Star: Mata ne! |
Pokefan291 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 Love it. These playful stories are so nice and cute! Can't wait to see who wins! |
SHSL Kariya Masaki chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 ...BWAHAHAHA! OMG, THIS IS...GOLD! HAHAHA XDDDD I should play this gamr sometime... Guessing? Hmm...I won't guess, I don't wanna guess, I'm lazy XP You better make part 2 soon! XDDD |
R. Akemi chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 I love this fic. I love the teams especially Team 1. I love Shindou Haha... anyways, please update because i wanna know what happens next XD |
Monolaymoo chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 So much for never writing another fic again. |