I read this on Wattpad and THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE SASUSAKU FANFIC. I just really really love this fanfic :-)

Hey!
There were a lots of grammar mistakes and some incoherence mostly in the first chapters of the story but I would like to say that anyway it was such a great story. Love the action, suspence, emotion and specifically... The tension who was omnipresent in the fic! I saw nobody talked about the first meeting between Ryuuna and Sasuke when she came in Konoha so I'm gonna say THAT WAS REALLY SWEET AND CUTE! The way he was enjoying himself looking at her while she had her adventure to get the apple lmao the way he got almost immediately interested by her and found her cute and pretty as he said, all smirking. It's really unusual from Sasuke to take an interest in kids but here he is. It felt like he instantly had a bond with her even without knowing who she is and that was really lovely. Again when Ryuuna wake up in his house and found him in the kitchen, I loved the way the little sweetie wasn't neither impressed or afraid by the usual cold attitude of her daddy. They got along in some way ahahah He always paid attention to whatever the little girl said to him. They were really cute together. I hoped more scene just the two of us because I was amazed with each of their interactions

I think you made a mistake with the Five Year Arc. Before that Sakura displayed confusion, resentment, and love for Sasuke, normal feelings to sympathize with. Afterwards though, she is incredibly negative towards him, jarringly so, and it feels like you dragged it out as long as possible to extend the plot. Even with Sasuke hurting Naruto, Sakura broke Narutos spine a later on, so I dont think it was that bad.

Sasuke not recognizing his daughter for a large part of the story is also kind of stretching it. I mean, he is not Naruto, with his abilities he should have sensed her true parentage much earlier. Also, things like Japanese decour and China towns are not part of the Narutoverse. Apart from that, the fic was fine.

The story was entertaining.
But i hated how toxic sakuras and sasukes relationship was.
And how a horrible parent both of them were. If your child is kidnapped, you dont send them to your friends place over night right after just to get laid.

Good story. Though some if not all chapters are unedited, the grammar is still good. The flow of the story is good. Though there are ideas/parts of this story I dont agree with, I still like it. Hope to read more from you. Thank you for sharing!

Good job! I just finished this story, it was one hell of a ride.

No wonder the title seems familiar because I’ve read this in wattpad hehe lemme just say i really enjoyed reading this story one of the best sasusaku fanfics I’ve read great job author-chan! 333

Loved it!

Initially, I found it a little difficult to leave a review because there were just so many elements that played into this story. Probably the only downside to this fic was the grammar, but even then, it isn't a big issue. The main thing about this fic is that it constantly kept you on your feet. Once you began to think things were about to slow down, they'd just ramp up again. Time and time again you'd be caught off guard with the events that would transpire. It just left me in anticipation on what would come next. It was such a roller coaster ride and overall, I loved it! Thank you so much for blessing us with your writing. :)

First of all thank you for writing this amazing story! I read this on wattpad and immediately searched for it here on and I'm so glad you also uploaded this here! It may not be as popular in wattpad but this story is definitely one of the best I've read! How I wished this story was real and this was what really happened after the 4th Great Ninja War. I guess all of us wanted to have a glimpse of what happened after the war particularly to Sasuke-Sakura's love story and this fanfic satisfied my thirst for that. If I don't know what happened in the manga/anime and happened to read this one, I would have thought this was actually what Kishimoto have written!

Oooh, I remember this story. I think I read it on Wattpad, too. Keep writing!

Okay... it is so rare for me to get really hooked 100% ,in a fanfic and feel like the characters were real and enerything. Absolitely mezmerizing fanfic. Minus the wrong grammars. But, all in all it’s just perfect. Loved it

I hate how everyone keep pushing sakura to sasuke. Can't they see how bad sasuke treat sakura? It is hard enough for sakura to move on, and her friends keep pushing her to someone who always hurt her. I hate sasuke so much. Sakura deserve someone better than him.

i love it so muchh! this fanfic is so good! i read it non stop and it takes me a whole day HAHAHHAHA.

Wow. That was awesome. You know I read the reviews before reading this and I know it'll be a happy ending but hot damn woman, the drama and angst killed me. The progress dragged on for me but it worked out amazingly. Sasuke's confession though was a bit OOC butcwhat the heck, it's your story. Good job on this!