That was really interesting, never read one from Moriarty's point of view. It was good.

That. Was. Amazing.
You've nailed Moriarty there - the way his mind works, his acting, his everything. A perfect analysis of every tiny detail of the scene, spot-on.
A fantastic piece indeed :)
Marmelatta

Good! In character, well written, enjoyable read.

Really lovely. Moriarty is one character I haven't even thought about trying to get inside yet, and you do him incredibly well. I love how he's split Jim into another personality, another person that he detests...that's a beautiful little gem, something I can see him doing. Your characterization is spot on...you've written Moriarty's mind intelligently, gotten into his psyche without being overly dramatic or villain-esque (even though he's both), and it makes for a simple, stunning bit of writing that had me hooked from start to finish. Right on.

awesome

i loved jim moriarty's take on what happened on that fateful day

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Wow, this was really well written!

SW