Hi, Wuchen 5! This fanfic is so realistic and well-written, Kiyomasa's feelings are well expressed! I love this! 3

I'm not really one to write reviews (due to my awkwardness) but I have to say, this is the most emotional piece of writing I've read in a long time. Additionally, it is the first to make my eyes slowly water. Thank you so much for your admirable story *wipes eyes*

AMAZING.
I only just got into the SW fandom, didn't even know this pairing existed...BUT AMAZING.
Keep writing!

Well written and realistic. I love the mention of her cloths distracting the enemy soldiers :P Her last line is very good as well. I always thought is was so tragic about the family ending like that...

This was beautifully written. I can hear emotions ringing through the story, well done!