YES! She's finally gotten a backbone! (not that she didn't have one before, but she's showing it more now :).)
I absolutely adore strong, capable, self-appreciating Satori! She's awesome! :D

Holy crap this chapter made me cry. I'm serious - the tears are, literally, gathering in my eyes and threatening to spill down my face. How in the good name of God do you do it? Loved this. And, let me guess, Satori learns a few moves, huh? Does she learn to chi-block or something? You know, learn to fight and all so she can hold her own? That would be pretty epic. :) Anyway, gonna read on and find out now... :D

This is an amazing story. Please continue it, there's just so much that can't be abandoned. Korra is awesome, Satori is awesome, they're all awesome. Please pick this story back up again.

Please, keep your account! Even though you won't be writing anymore, I'm sure people would like to read your stories again, or for the first time in the future!

That was awsome I really like this you should really update though good job

Lol it's ok you onlY FUCKING BROKE ME
I'm so sooo glad you want to start writing novels. I mean god knows I would buy all of your books.. but leaving the story like that? You hit me. Right in the feels. That shit hurts like a bitch. It would be the most amazing thing if you ever were to continue this fanfic tho. I can't stop thinking about it!

Oh come on, don't make an entire chapter an author's note. That's unfair to the reader. That aside, I really like how the rest of your story has been coming along.

have you thought of putting this story up for adoption? Then it could be finished, but you would still be able to work on your book, which i think is a pretty awesome thing to do. (The book, not the story being finished.)

This story was amazing. I understand why you are abandoning this story but please if you ever find spare time in the summer or some type of school break and you look back at this story and have enough time post a chapter. I don't mean to sound demanding or anything I just really like this story and your writing and it would make me immensely happy.

WHAT! NO YOU CAN'T LEAVE I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

Hope you'll get that book published. I understand.

Well as much as I'm mad at you for quitting, I'm glad you're trying your hand at an actual book. Would you mind PMing me what you plan to call it so I can keep an eye out for it? Funny how this story is called I Won't Give Up, but that's exactly what you did on it...just had to get one last jibe in there...good luck!

*Wipes a tear and sniffles* Your forgiven. And though my lack of imagination means that republic city got nuked and they all died, this will always be one of my favorite stories. :3

I wish luck in your novel.

Aw I'm so sad you won't be finishing these up but I really respect your decision. There are a lot more important things in life to do and I'm glad you told us instead of just vanishing out of nowhere. Thanks so much for the beautiful fictions you've written and I hope to one day read your own novels! *hug*