“ Demiveemon looked at him and cocked his head to the side ''you humans act illogical…'' “

Anyone else pictured Spock from Star Trek?

all i wanted to say i started reading Digimon fanfiction when i was 13 and stoped for some time,im now 18 and started reading again and this story...I LOVED IT! Please do more like this.I Couldnt stop reding it so thank you for this nice story!

Oh my god! Best story EVER! This just inches out my previous #1 favorite fanfic of all time and takes the lead! If there IS more, then I will read the HELL out of that motherfucker (sorry for the language)! I loved the character interactions, they just felt so REAL, in fact EVERYTHING did! Like if I made my own snarky comments, they would appear on the page with me, as a character, saying them! Keep up the great work!

Haha I liked the jab at Sorato. If you gotta write about it may aswell tell people whassup right. Anyway just wanted to say that ill review again at eh end

I stick to what i said last time, you really know how to write a good story :)

If you want ideas about an adventure story, there are still some loose strings in the original storyline (of adventure 02). First of all, we never got to know about the dark oceans "master" Dagomon. Focusing the story around the dark ocean would also put Kari to the test, as well as to allow Davis to "be there" for her (I really don't like that T.K.s the one who saved her last time). Also, if you want some more longlasting you could also dig deeper into Daemon, the cloaked evil digimon that they imprisonned in the dark ocean. He had the power to stop all the digidestined at once and was never destroyed, as he said he would return, that's a good string to spin a story around.

Ah an ending, something I have only ever wrote on oneshots, but anyway it was good, and I see you finially found a fan artist. So now go write that adventure story, and always remember you need any ideas or help with that then just pm me

this was awesome

I love this chapter

Is it over already? Aww, too bad,I really liked this story. I agree that this was the best overall chapter, but I also liked the scene at the beach. Anyway, you and this story rocks! I hope you write similar stories in the future, I look forward to reading those! By the way, you don't happen to plan a sequel to this? It would be interesting to see how Karis and Davis relationship turns out. :)

Best Chapter EVEEEEEEERR! Daikari Rules!

I love how you bring the diction up. Personally I love it when you described how messed Davis's life after he broke with his girlfriend. I dont know, all of them are kind of opened up, and easy to approach. Esp. Davis and Kari. Lemme go on.

Finally another DaKari! I'll make sure to read and review it tonight. Well, about fanart... I'm happen to love DaKari and I suppose I have a style in drawing. Visit here to make u sure: .com

its been a long time since my last draw. So what kind of fanart then?

Ps: I'm suck coloring, in more than one way FYI

Hi there!

I wrote a review just yesterday for your four first chapters and I haven't really changed my mind since then. I still think your doing an awesome job. That memory when Davis got into the hospital was really well thought out. I have actually been through that situation myself, seeing someone you like get hooked on someone else really hurts. It feels like you have lost everything and don't really care for anything anymore. You can't get it out of your mind and you have problem to focus on anything else. You just walk around blindly and don't really notices anything around you. Even though i wasn't hit by a scooter and sent to the hospital, I really felt down for quite some time.

If i would give you an advice it would be to dig deeper into that lonely feeling you get in those situations. Often when you are in that situation, you also get illwishes against the person your love is hooked on. You want him to disapear. I remember i used to imagine myself smacking him in the face. Also, I wanted to talk to the person i liked about it, but i couldn't really find the courage to do it. However, I think Davis is much more open in what he feels and would be able to gather that courage.

I know that it was just flashback Davis had that feeling, but i can tell you, it sticks with you for quite some time. It has stuck with me for two years, even if i don't think about as much anymore. I also think it would be possible for Davis and T.K. to feel that way about each other, should Kari ever begin to get closer to one of them. Even if you don't feel love for the person in question, you still feel a strange will to hit the person she hooks up with, if you have ever imagined yourself as her boyfriend.

But as I said, you're doing an awesome job so keep it up!

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Awesome work

: I'm glad my story is appreciated! Davis's nightmares are more a symbol and a blend between experiences he have had in previous battles. I am currently planning to use Magnamon in a sequel adventure-like story where Davis's and Kari's relationship will continue, yet not be in the spotlight.

The destiny destroyer attack is a power that Armaggedomon uses. A Digimon who is in the fourth Digimon movie called ''Diaboromon strikes back''. The other 3 movies are on one dvd disc which are all amazing. The 4th movie is watchable, but still kind of a dissapointment in the sense that it is too damn short! Which is a damn shame because it is so crisp! It's action scenes could be taken from Michael Bay's Transformers in all honesty.