Reviews for Twisted Fate
Lovi chapter 3 . 5/30/2017
I love this, please continue it!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/18/2017
Can you please continue this?
k1096 chapter 3 . 7/13/2015
Wow started bawling my eyes out when Francis came in ... Looks like Matthieu def has to rethink his life over since Francis is there and the fact that Alfred is in the area too and plus a yet to be developed relationship with Gil ;)
I don 't know why but I have this huge feeling that this is all a scheme , maybe it 's just that Hetalia itself is comedy based , idk , I mean Afthur is usually paired with Francis or Alfred (I 'd prefer Alfred tbh ,) so it 's kind of new to see him as the only ... "Antagonist " so far , not sure if he is actually an official one tho .

Anyways Nice chapter , very nice . I hope this updates soon , tho don 't find the need to rush it , we all have busy lives .
k1096 chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
Wait there are five chapters total ? There must be more to this than I expected , hopefully a lot of fluffs from Gil and Mattie ;3

I feel like I 'm looking at another short of Arthur and Alfred , Arthur is a pretty ... I wouldn 't say bad , but ... Awkward ? Guardian 3
k1096 chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Omfg , you ... Ship PruCan ...? Just got done reading your True Sacarfice , and wondered if you had anymore Bunny fics but found some PruCan instead , I am a happy reader .
Anyways great start , I like this theme . With Matthiue already the invisible and quiet one , he 'd be perfect for an assassin , honestly , hahaa , tho his mentality would reject it . I hope Gil helps save his soon to be Birdie from Arthur v
IncredibleKaity chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
Oh this is really good! If you decide to update it I'll definitely be the first to read it!
cannoWrite chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
erhmahgerd! I really want to continue reading this! please continue this! I BEG OF YOU MY AWESOME WRITER!
ERR0R C0DE 404 chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
Very interesting!
Anonimoose chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
I LOVE IT! Now you have to write more to the story because it was fantastic! You honestly have no choice in this matter! Update please!
Mew I is Dinosaur chapter 3 . 8/10/2012
Elsep is sleep! I feel so proud that I figured that out!
Matthew is so close to his goal! Gah! And if Alfred is a servant, he could be sleeping next to him!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Good story! Keep going!
nobody10901 chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
AHHHHHH. THE DRAMATIC IRONY IS KILLING ME. KILLING. ME. ;_;

Matthew was so close to finding Francis... AND THEN HE RAN INTO GIL AND LUDWIG AND DOESN'T KNOW THEY'RE THE BROTHERS AND ANSLFNKWNXKWNDI.

STOP IT. STOPPPPPPP... IT...

Beautiful chapter! Excellent detail! I enjoyed the length of this chapter. I saw a couple of typos, like a misplaced comma, but they weren't that major.

Awesome! Keep it up! Update soon! Thanks!
Stine chan USA chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
This is awesome! As awesome as the awesome Prussia! But now I'm confused about Matthew's family tree... So is the Alfred and Francis and Arthur the same as Matthew's brother's and boss? So if they are, then Matthew also has a sister, Madeline? Imma exploded
NotascrazyasI chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
Oh, wow this is really cool so far! I can't wait for more!
America96 chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
Update, Update, Update right now! i is extremely impatient and i find i really really like this story!
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