I don't know what had happened or what is going to happen but I like it. If there weren't more of your fics for me to tackle, I would've just sat here and thought of all the possible ways this short story could've gone.

intriguing... are you going to write more on this

Please update this! I want to know why!? Please come back to this soon!

Aww so sad and touching.

I know this is a very short opening shot that you didn't take anywhere, but I like it anyway. I can imagine a similar dialogue going down under slightly different circumstances pre-android saga. Do you think you will take it anywhere one day?

This looks interesting. I can't wait to see what the rest of the story is like.

Very cool start! Can't wait to read more!

I love this. I wish you would do some more with this. This would be an intersting full blown one-shot or possibly a short multi-chapter story. I am curious of this background now! Ugh, this was very well written! I saw you posted on blue and black Live journal, plus I have been told about your writing by a friend of mine. I am very happy that I decided to look at your profile. I can't wait to read more of your writing!

Interesting, the millions of possibilities! What could have gone wrong? Maybe something stupid, maybe everything!

:D

always great to hear from you

hope ur school stuff is going well.

ooh it looks interesting and keep going :)tnx

woooo, i'm hooked already! Please update soon, before the curiousity kills me!

Wow, I really like this start! Keep it going, I can't wait to see where you take this. :D

A bit like a teaser trailer from a movie. Just a little bit from a scene...okay. I'm interested.

Truly beautiful

Nice story )