you need to do some serious proof reading... there are tons of mistakes and i am not interested in a story where I have to guess what you’re trying to say every other sentence

great story.

ZOMFCMBG THIS IS SO AWESOME KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK AND UPDATE WHENEVER YOU CAN
Y IS CAPS LOCK ON sorry continue lol you did great

" Just Pain." Is that a bad or good thing? Haha I'll take it as good xD
Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next update!
WAC

Hakiu seems to have quite an effect on little Yuuki that not even the poor but sexy father has. Looking forward the next chapter.

oh c'mon continue please!
i think you shoul make your own real book from this :)

Hakiu is so cute! I wonder,who will adopt him, or will no one adopt him?

luv story.

How couls someone abandoned a child? the poor boy, and awww I can imagined Sasukes daughter most be so pretty.

Update soon! Its really interesting :) I want to read more and more! XD

Hakiu... Hope hes not a Madaras soldier...
And hope he become great friends with Daisuke... :)

kkkk Mikotos the boss XD

I like very much the idea of the books, since you are handeling this story so good being like this, Itachis determined bahavior makes me so excited

Yay!
Going to wait anxiously for the next chapters :)

Please Finish