I absolutely love this story! Even though Halt was to stubborn to buy a duck tape bracelet, I still love the ending!

"Then you can call me doofus for the rest of your life."
"Sure, What's the plan?"
That made me laugh, typical boys.

This story has a funny ending. And, it is understandable even without reading 'The Ranger's Gift'.

This is pretty funny! LOL! Are there more than 5 chapters?

... wow...
... it certainly puts a whole new meaning to special moments...

now will gets to call gilan doofus! yay:)

OK that was hysterical, weird, fantastic, and down right odd, oh and enjoyable :)

OH my gosh, I'm laughing so hard, I'm crying.

Btw, I would say "cleverness," not "smartness."

lol knew will would get to call Gil "Dofus" XD

I can already tell this is going to be very interesting!

Yours truly,

Ranger 51

HAHAHA! Awesome. :) Yes, I liked this silly little story. :D

OKAY OKAY OKAY, I'LL REVIEW! Sheesh. All I want is to get to the next chapter...I can't wait to see how this plays out!

Gilan was OOC throughout the whole fic. Also, just giving Will an invisibility cloak doesn't seem like something that would happen in the series. Also, a coffee beans deliverer showing up at Halt's front door knowing his full name with Gilan's voice and height and claiming to be delivering something that Halt never ordered... Well, I think that Halt would be much more suspicious. Also, what was the point of giving Halt a disguised bag of duct tape bracelets (that wouldn't exist in the Ranger's Apprentice world)? I mean, they could've just brought them into the house when Halt was sleeping or something. I thought that they were trying to get Halt to actually buy a duct tape bracelet.

great story iw was very amusing great job

Ah! That was refreshingly funny. I was wondering about that, because Gil hadn't asked for the money before giving Halt the bag. And I see now!