Are you going to continue this story?

I have to say, just went trough your story.
I am still a little bit puzzled by the Nexus stuff and "time is an illusion" but in fact it catched me.
Also, one of the sweetest Liara/Fshep pairing I had to read since 2011 :)
If you need help or beta-reader, i will be honoured (as long as I have time of course)

Keep up the good work!
Lud

great to something again from you, it was a cute chapter.

Wow... Cycle 3. That's some serious backstory. The start of the beacons and the start of the Nexus. Cool concept. I like. Seems I have discovered you at a good time if you are able to complete the ME1 installment during this semester. I like semi-regular updates!

Love that the dream forced/encouraged more openness between the two, bringing up the names of the past, Maleigh/Jackson/Teddy/Benezia... And glad the relationship has taken the next step forward, but not straight to sex. Slow roll is good. But I'm sure Virmire is next, but a necessary evil for story progression. You tell a good tale... looking forward to the next!

I like this version much better than the game... Nice that you include issues about the estate and a final message from Benezia... always hated that all Liara received were the final few words of a dying Matriarch. Points for you!

So even the wise Matriarch required guidance... like it!

Late to the game, just recently found you... This is going great. Like that pull from all three games. It doesn't makes sense not to. It's only a 3 or 4 year time frame... technology isn't going to change that much where stuff available in 2186 isn't around in 2183, so good on you!

Loved your background story. Provides some great depth to your Shepard.

I know it's been over half a year but I really hope you didn't forget about the story, because I really enjoy it ;)

Will this story be continued?

I've now caught this up and like it quite a bit. I am sorry you've needed surgery and hope you are recovering from characters are developing nicely and I do hope that you handle the forthcoming lemon as thoughtfully as you have been the developments so far. Its unfortunate that the game really doesn't give you the platform for looking much into other characters' makeup (beyond Shepherd and not even her very much)in ME1.I hope you'll find a way to do this in spite of the rush of the game's plot.
Thanks for your hard work so far, best wishes for your recovery.

Just catching this up, for some reason ff wouldn't let me review ch7. In that chapter you have Liara's chees tinging red in the scene on top of the Mako early in the chapter. Other than this small error you're doing great so far. Enough new elements to keep the basic plot interesting and great character development on your Shepherd. Looking forward to completeing the catch-up and thankful for your hard work on this so far.

Thank you for sharing. I love what you did on the inheritance but Im guessing theres more. Also is there a chance you will not kill Shepard after the ME1 storyline? Still looking forwared to the next installment.

Very good chapter. Well done.

*waves* sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this. school has been a nightmare, I've had papers and projects and all, and I just haven't had time. but i'm glad I finally found some. *grins* and I see you couldn't wait until the end of the story for their first kiss! *winks* good for you!

the parts with Liara and Shepard in this chapter were sweet, and it's a different and interesting take, as I've thought throughout all of the bits where they seemed predestined to be together. so leaving the chapter off like this was a nice way to finish it.

as for the rest of the chapter, I can definitely see in parts that you were in a hurry to skim through it, but that's totes fine. i'm sure most, if not all of your readers, have played the games. we don't need a step by step of the entire mission, and you hit all the important bits (with variations in some cases, which keep it fresh *smiles*) on the way through. and I have to admit, I wish renegade interrupts were in the first game, because you have no idea how much I wanted to shoot Jeong like Shepard did here when I played the game.

just a few little bits for chapterly error pointy out time.

"Yeah," Shepard murmured in agreeance,

agreement would be the word.

"Ah," he sneared, "Commander Shepard.

sneered. two e's

"Alright," Shepard began, turning towards Liara and Garrus, "We'll sneak out on the ride side.

I think you meant the right side, but you put ride instead.

"You weren't replied with my first one," Shepard chuckled.

I think you meant satisfied instead of replied.

"I've been dodging being completely forthright with you. I think a meld would is the best way."

would be or is. I think you switched ideas there and accidentally mixed both. *smiles*

that's all I've got. kudos on another fine chapter, and i'm glad I finally got to read it. keep up all your excellent work! and of course, try not to let school drive you too crazy! *waves*

Wow. :-D That was hella awesome. Now that's the way to start a beautiful romance. Whew. Soulmates. Outstanding. More, please? ;-)