You make me cry

I love the thoughts and what he wouldve said to her! Really well written and still very in character.

I have to agree; the clincher was definitely that line about Coulson. You really captured his dive from hope to despair as he redirected the nuke and Pepper did not pick up.

Nice job here. Good expansion of the movie-scene. Keep writing!
Blessings,
Sophia the Scribe

UGH THIS KILLED ME

That was awesome.

Oh, this is...

I was okay, right up until "I'll tell Phil you said 'hey'," Then I abruptly teared up.

This was beautifully written

that's how you do a fanfic!

Small, though heartbreaking. The, "I'll tell Phil you said 'hey'." bit really tugged at my heartstrings. Beautiful.

This was tugging on the strings of my heart, ok? I enjoyed reading this very much. It had a lot of emotions and was just AH! Lovely job :)

Aw this is so amazing! I love it so much!

Did you know that this is the first fanfiction I read? This was back when I still wasn't completely sure what a fanfiction was, and I was rather disconcerted by some of it because I didn't know how to work the rating filters (O.x)! Still, I was poking through my old iPod and I found it saved in my notes, like I did with all the fanfictions I found and liked back then (now, of course, I just favorite it,) and I checked, but I hadn't checked on it since I joined! I just want to thank you for being one of the reasons why I'm here writing fanfiction.
Allons-y,
themagicoakleaf

I was doing just fine until you mentioned Phil. I just finished the Supernatural episode 'Taxi Driver', so my feels were already on high alert. And then you came along with your perfect story and made me tear up again.

What's the song?