Excellent, let her become wicked! :D

Just wanted to tell you how much I liked your fan fic. I thought it was wonderful and you did a brilliant job. I can't wait to read the sequel.

Loving it so far.

But some critique: Sometimes the sentences might need to be broken up, due to length. Or simply seperate into two sentences. Also, a word here or there missing, or a letter that needs to be de-capitalized, like in

""Good try." He said then turned his spear and pressed the point into her chest."

Doctor Who reference for the win! Like looking into the TARDIS. That was an excellent way for me to visualize what had happened.

okay. Wait a moment. I didn't get the end of the next chapter. Oh, okay. I'm stupid. FCK YEAH. So she ends up alive. Thanks God. Please, forget about my last review *bows* (i had to review this one cause fanfiction. net doesn't let you review twice the same chapter, but anyway)
LOVE YOUR FIC

OHMYFRIKINGGOD. How could you make it end like that? i mean, i've loved your fic, but i thought the end would be like ALL THE OTHER LOKI/OC CHEESY STORIES that i've read so far and she would end up with him. OMG.
Anyway, awesome story :)

Never have I read a whole of 22 chapters in one go. This very was nicely written.

Epic Epic stuff, sequel please! Xx

please make a sequel!

This story feels there could be a sequel.

But anyways I loved this was different but amazing.

This was very entertaining, I liked Voltage, she reminded me strongly of Elle Bishop from Heroes, lol! So Helen is alive... please please tell me you're doing a sequel? I would hate for Loki (though fictional, heh) to think her dead. Plus it's just got a lot of sequel potential :) Ciao!

This story is freaking amazing! I feel as if I join so late and it's almost to a closing. But since I saw no complete sign on this I can assume it's not over. Keep up the good work and can't wait to see what you do next.

OH MY GOSH! Oh I knew she couldn't have died!

OMG!

I cant believe I missd the secret message. I knew that it looked funny. I was just so sad that you had killed Helen. But she's not dead. *SQEEEEEEEE*

happy happy happy.

I love mondays

...so she's alive?

AND HER NEED TO TALK.

Atleast cap got a happy ending, :l