You should update this.

Fantastic wok. I really mean it. I'm assuming the crew of Umbrella operatives were inspired from Operation Raccoon City. A game I still love.

Now for the chapter. It was a great read. Just by the basic character interaction alone was worth reading. I mean, Lone Wolf and Nikolai are generally okay characters by themselves but I see the potential. LW to me, seems to be the only person that could hold a conversation with HUNK in my mind. His dialogue and brief relationship description worked fantastically. With him being the pilot, I'm so curious on what kind of combat skills he could show off to his co-workers. The brief mention of Ada and Nikolai smiling was a great minor detail that just adds so much flavor to a story. With Ada, she does have some kind of ulterior motive all the time and it was funny for Lone Wolf to speak up when she made her advances. I think your writing is pretty good with just some grammer hiccups here and there. Nothing a little editing won't fix.

The conversation and logic was so smooth. The narrowed down possible reason of why the group was shot down. That was fantastic. I'm a nerd when it comes to technical and Iogical details when a situation happens.

Now for the character I love the most in Resident Evil. HUNK in this was pretty awesome. His one liner in the end along with his work ethics matched him perfectly. I'm happy to know on how much a person could write him in such a way. When the mission to a turn for the worse, his reaction to it felt fitting. Plus, I wonder on what else he could do for the mission and what Ada will think of him. I like to think of HUNK like an owl. They're killers, cold, tactical and have a goal in mind. In the distance, an Owl looks magestic and soothing, when it reality, it's ruffled feathers, surround by bones, and ticks. Here, he feels that way as I read him. Wonderful. :-)

I love this introduction and I really hope you could return to it. Have an awesome day.

The Eager Reader -Will

Nice chapter i cant wait for the next chapter u should seriously keep it up

I hope nicholai plays a major role, i liked the way he is portrayed so far and he is my fave

i love this story make more soon

Man im going to like this.

That last line... ._.;

HAHA awesome defiantly update A.S.A.P want to see the rest of the characters come in and see how it turns out only thing maybe is do one more grammar check to make sure the grammar is right cause I noticed a couple things in this chapter not a flame just a suggestion to help make the story easier to read and more likeable.

UPDATE! we desperatly need more HUNK fics on this there is NOT enough

Love it