| Reviews for Rise of the Bluejay |
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   aurum88 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013 This should be exciting. I like that name "Angel Devine" interesting. Just one quick thing to point out though, Tim Drake was NOT the second Robin, Jason Todd was. He was sort of killed (but it didn't take). And Jason DOES in fact exist in the YJ-verse since he has a sort of little cameo in season 2 episode 8 (satisfaction). Check his out sometime. He's pretty asterous. |
| tigrun chapter 38 . 7/7/2012 love it awesome |
| Sujaku28 chapter 38 . 6/20/2012 Overall it was an okay story, but it could use suggestions: Grim reaper should've had a proper super villain name HOW COULD ANGEL LIE TO ROUGE LIKE THAT! I mean if you knew this was coming you couldve at least turned rouge into a villain that escaped or never have mentioned him at all! Also you could have focused a bit more on the other pairings (zatanna\robin, superboy/ms m, & spitfire) since it was mentioned in the summary (which was actually what caught my attention and made me read the story). On top of that I think that you caught the characters terribly wrong. Nightwing (now a lot more serious than when he was robin) was WAY too nice to angel, flashin her a smile every now and then, I do NOT imagine nightwing like that, EVEN if the girl was totally emotionally damaged. He is a Lot more of a leader and a serious and mature character. Superboy was also waaaay too cheery (if youn were trying to portray him as the cartoon network character, this totally did not work). I also disliked how you would bring in aqualad and other team members andyou never brought then In again. It was totally inconsistent how they were in the middle of a mission and then totally disappear. Other than that, I think that youv have potential to be a good writer with some experience and some major critiques so that you lean from your mistakes. I'm sure you'll do a better Job with the sequel. Btw I know this review is FREAKISHLY long but I do hope you read it. |
| tdyn0 chapter 38 . 6/18/2012 Can't wait for the new chapter! I'm glad you decided to let her know Tim's identity, it makes things cooler I guess lol. |
| CrazyIsCreativeWriting chapter 38 . 6/16/2012 Well good job nice tat she can finally relax an be hapoy until ur sequeal good job o. It ciao! Sakura |
| memmek10k chapter 38 . 6/16/2012 great chapter and great story I hope dick and zee are still together as well as wallXart Tim and angel can't wait to read the sequel |
| sunflower13 chapter 38 . 6/16/2012 Awwwww...very cute ending. Can't wait for your new story! |
| The February Rose chapter 38 . 6/16/2012 AWWWWW! I loved the ending! Thank you for ending it before I went off to camp. I'll pm you when I get back, okay? Again, I LOVED it! |
| STicker55 chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 Awwww that was so cute and lol he gir scolded |
| CrazyIsCreativeWriting chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 Omg loved it yyay sequealllllllkl! An wat yj wont hav another episode till sept. Is tat were sayin! No! Jst whn it was getting good!ciao! Sakura |
| Airmage chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 hey great chapter, can't wait for the finale or the sequel! |
| tdyn0 chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 Hmmmmm, update soon! Though I reviewed quite late, I am ready for the ending and the sequel! It will give us something to keep us occupied until YJ comes back on! |
| sunflower13 chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 Very cute and fluffy. Bit I thought the hiatus was till August? |
| memmek10k chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 great but short chapter :) |
| The February Rose chapter 37 . 6/15/2012 Ooooo, what is the Grim Reaper? |
