| Reviews for Betrayals and Alliances |
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rpsabrina1 chapter 21 . 4/10 Bella should kill The Cullen's |
Mistress Saturn1 chapter 21 . 9/12/2019 Has this been abandoned? |
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 2 . 6/1/2019 Your portrayal of Edward, Emmett and Alice is so utterly lame. Bella too actually. This would have been so much better without dramatically changing all their personalities. Bella is so pathetic it's ridiculous. And all of this happens in the cafeterias in front of hundreds of teens? The idea was good but your execution is abysmal. I'm thoroughly disappointed. |
tinkermist99 chapter 21 . 2/13/2019 plz update |
fallondyson chapter 21 . 1/13/2018 PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE |
raven coleman chapter 21 . 12/30/2017 I loved it tho I was a bit upset when u put the story on hold but hey I understand completely |
skyeza chapter 21 . 12/8/2017 This was so freaking awesome, i truly enjoyed and loved it. I thought it was very unique and entertaining. I really hope that you will continue/complete this story even if it completely rewritten. |
QueenElsaSalvatore chapter 21 . 9/30/2017 dont hate you but cant wait to read the rest of this story |
tamwhit chapter 21 . 9/24/2017 Please update your story soon |
andjelija.nenic chapter 17 . 8/16/2017 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
MCJwolflover chapter 21 . 7/16/2017 Please write some more, I love this story so far. |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/4/2017 Can't she just bring her siblings back to life? |
Chey chapter 21 . 1/31/2017 I hope you finish the story soon! |
Guest chapter 20 . 1/15/2017 KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZ |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/3/2016 This is so conflicting. At the start they are like family then like a button being switched they aren't? I enjoy the story but it is getting hard to follow. |