I love this story! I'm sorry that you won't be on ffnet anymore and that you don't like what it has turned into. (I kinda signed up on AO3 just so I could read your story lol) I hope to read some more work from you soon!

Love this!

AO3? I'm going to search for that, because I've never heard of it, but this is a complex, well written story that I would hate to miss out on just because I didn't look for the web site. Hope to comment there.

Wtf? One of the few story's worth reading just disappears? WTF and wtf is AO3?

Great job

I do hope you continue to update this story. I love it.

So Ty Lee's secrets are being revealed! While the mysteries of the hidden temple only stir more questions than answers.

I can understand your frustration with FFnet's changing policies, but I hope you continue to post chapters of your ongoing stories here. I like AO3 and post fics there myself, but they're having serious problems with traffic congestion, and I've been experiencing some frustration there lately as a result. I also don't think they have a New Story/Chapter alert system set up yet.

Oh dear god. I thought I was the only one who started hating on Fanfiction. Although mine is mostly on the image thing, I think it's starting to whore itself out.

But... but... I would still love to read more of your stories. ;.; You've gotten closer than ever to answering the questions, and I'd definitely be trying to chase down whatever the continuation of this story is, whether on FF or not. Say, what IS AO3? This is the first time I've heard of it.

To the actual review: I've noticed you write in this particular style that most people find really hard to do, much less pull off. Present tense, all around. It gives a direct sense to the reader of being right smack in the middle of everything and experiencing things real time more than the past tense thing. Awesome part is you barely mix any of those, whereas the usual thing you read starts out trying the present for kicks and then ending up morphing into past tense. Great job.

The fact that it's more of a general fic is refreshing, and that romance is taking a slow, steady pace and is in the background too.

Anyway, you write like hell, you, and I love it.

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Let's see if I got this right.

TY LEE IS A FUCKING AIR BENDEEEEEEEEERRRRR! Amirite? Amirite? I want to cuss so bad because you are so AWESOME in making twists. I did not see that one coming and it hit me just in this chapter. What. The. Hell.

Can't wait to see how the next chapter will turn out. Yes. I can just feel this is going to be awesome.

HOLY

I never realized that this would be updated this fast, but yeah. I like it. :D

The way it's progressing so far is good. You're laying out the bits and pieces of things to come, I can just sense it. Never expected Yue to make another appearance after turning into the moon, so that was a nice surprise. Now, onto the next chapter!

...Hm, so Ty Lee is an airbender maybe? quite a nice twist.. and since your summary says that there's a reason why avatar something something 16... it all clicks together now.. :D at least i hope i'm right and you're not just throwing Ty Lee's fiddling out there to throw people off xD.

*-* this is amazing, Liked specially the outcome of the comet battle, but the motives the characters are behaving like that is still a little confused, but I guess it will come clean with time...so, Ty Lee is a airbender, great plot twist...Now I'm just waiting to know how the zutara thing will happen...

In your story Ty Lee is a descendant of Air Nomads?

So a secret AirBender Temple inhabited by Winged Lemurs and Sky Bison? Interesting, I'm just hoping that Aang, Appa and the others are ok :(

Good chapter. I can't wait for the next one.