oh what a beuatiful description of how they may have looked for those around them!

Hello, I know you wrote this a long long time ago, I didnt remember whether I had wrote to you or not, but I really wanted to tell you that, I love this story very much. It captures the siblings well and of their true self. I appreciate your story and from time to time, I will open this again, and re-read it. Thank you for an awesome story!
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Oh, this was sweet! I do think that, once they found out Who Aslan was in their world, they would do this! Great job! :D

This was very nice. The way you spun these words was perfect.

Nice story! But I usually read that Peter sings bass

I loved this so much, wonderful job.

It is a shame you have so few reviews. I found your writing very touching and your presentation flawless.

I have often wondered about how the Pevensies would be after their adventures in Narnia. I think your ideas are spot on. C.S. Lewis would be proud.

Thank you for sharing this. All the best, Dementor149.

Great story, well written from both a stylistic and technical point of view.

Wonderful. Very enjoyable, touching and in tune with the adult Kings and Queens of Fair Narnia. Thank you

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That was beautiful! I really liked how you captured the evolution of the Pevensies' personalities, especially Edmund's. I adored the part with them at the altar and the pastor seeing them as the kings and queens. Great story!

This is a beautiful story with spectacular description! I commend you, as this is truly special.

Lovely descriptions, beautiful story. Thank you.

That was just...absolutely lovely. Thank you very much for sharing it with us.

Beautiful, just beautiful. This story is simply touching and demonstrates just how wonderful Narnia is. You have captured the four siblings' demeanor in the style of Lewis himself. Keep up the good writing; you have a marvelous future in front of you.

Oh, iridescent. One word that describes these four children yet no-longer-children so perfectly. Lovely, lovely fic!