Nice job so far! If I were Rose, I probably would've been both confused and angry at the Time Lord Doctor, and I think you summed that up nicely.

One ticky, picky little comment about punctuation, though. When you use a dash to set off a separate clause within a sentence, make sure to put a space on each side of both dashes. Otherwise it looks like you're hyphenating two words instead of inserting a separate thought inside of another sentence. It makes it a little hard to sort out exactly what you're saying. That's my only complaint! Otherwise, good stuff. :-)

How lovely! A bumpy road to happily-ever-after makes sense for the two of them.

(I admit to still liking to think they used that piece of coral and grew themselves a TARDIS. Yeah, I know it's a deleted scene, but darn it-they need a TARDIS!)

That was lovely, a nice little 'here's what happened next' type story and it is really nice. Well layed out :) very nice

Oh yes! This was exactly the Rose/Ten2 fic I've been looking for. I loved it. This fic with gather plenty of reviews and favourites in time :)

So sweet! I love it

Nice story. I liked that they didn't just skip off, happily ever after into rainbows and sunshine when the "real" Doctor and TARDIS left.

Adorable story! I've always adored Rose and the Tenth Doctor together (just as I adore River and the Eleventh Doctor together) and I love the way you've rounded off their story together so well;-) I loved the fact that she got to end up with a version of her Doctor in the show but it is so lovely to see how you've concluded it and showed how it could work;-D

Nice way to end it.:-)

Like this chapter.:-)

Brilliant!

I liked this chapter.:-) I loved Rose in Doctor Who.

Interesting chapter.:-)

Nice chapter.:-)

Great chapter.:-)

Great start.:-) Can't believe no one has reviewed this.