| Reviews for Human Heat: An Embrella Outtake |
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Soledad Sanchez chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 very good. ! |
lana chapter 2 . 8/22/2012 why wouldnt bella give embry the time of day afterwards? and why did bella feel the need to apologize after she came so fast?i mean we girls shouldnt feel embarrassed, we can just continue immediately ;) |
BrookeBelikov chapter 1 . 6/12/2012 Great out take! |
meliz875 chapter 2 . 6/7/2012 I read this again just now...just for shits and giggles...and to get me all worked up. :P |
Robin.D chapter 2 . 5/28/2012 wow that was good :):):D:D |
paulswolfgirl2355 chapter 2 . 5/19/2012 I loved would have liked that embry and Bella ended up together. |
nhatfield4683 chapter 2 . 5/14/2012 U should turn that into a story |
ilovfanfic chapter 2 . 5/14/2012 loved it...but i think she could have go back to black and him to maya and keep those memories being friends...i think it would have been possible and it's hotter klike that!:) |
oohapoo chapter 2 . 5/13/2012 I like the vengeful Bella and Embry combo...almost as much as a good Bella and Paul. While I agree that this didnt fit with the story arc, its not so hard to believe it could be true in another arc. Betrayel can make you do some crazy things and Embry wasnt in tge position for Jake to see what had truly happened. Great job :) |
An Avid Reader Forever chapter 2 . 5/12/2012 like the new plot. please update soon |
Chat1 chapter 2 . 5/12/2012 I think it was amazing and if you ever get bored u should write an alternative to regression where Jacob never loses his memory and Bella n embry end up together. Bc that was awesome! |
Chat1 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012 That was hot. |
Zayide chapter 2 . 5/11/2012 Oh damn...a chapter after my request? I feelso...honored... Hot n bothered...holy FUCK! That was HAWT! Not to mention...wow...um... that was the mother of all awkward covos if I ever heard one! And boy have I had some duzzies! Em...please take ur dick out of the chicks pussy b4 u tell her that the love of her life has amnesia, lost his imprint and has nothing but returned to being the lovable guy from the time before they dated... Boy...if u want more suggestions for emb/bell or are going to write more pieces for this outtake drabbles...holla! I am a fan! Damn girl...hawt! Yum! I give u now the formal invite to read mine...not that u ever needed one...mine is not as good...yet...hopefully my beta's working on it tho...check it out..."cursed"...listed in my profile...as well as my second OS "april fool's indeed" |
nhatfield4683 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012 Loved it |
Zayide chapter 1 . 5/9/2012 Je-sus! *fanning self* The temperature around me rose...no like...like 20 degrees! But before I take tike to cool off, I had a need to ask...will u be making other outtakes like this one? I think u should...here is a request...(or a few) 1-the aftermath...embry making his mind up about not phasing anymore...why didn't he choose to torture jake with this experience. I don't know if anyone else wants to but I sure as HELL would like to know! 2-when embry finds her (his roadtrip) what if Bella would have wanted a repeat performance...drunk enough to eliminate all if any inhibitions and the memory of their last very hot encounter...to then reveal the reason fo his sudden appearance. 3-when embry phases after so long...he can't help the memories spill I hope u can do these...if not its okay...what's the worse u can do...tell me to...well, let's just say a negative response would be the worse outcome... Something I doubt bc u seem nice...(yep. I'm sucking up there...did it work? ;]) |