Wonderful! Just wonderful! Oh, please update soon! This story is so unique, so heart breaking, and characterisation is also unique- but it works !:) keep it up!:)
Emily x

Waah this was so excellently written! I'm loving the way you're portraying the characters and this scene was just perfect... Now, onto the next chapter!:)

This story is so sad. I really hope there is a happy end. I love your descriptive skills and there were no annoying mistakes :) I hope you write more soon :)

I really like this! Your writing style is beautiful and descriptive, no distracting grammar errors (which happens way too often in other fics, haha), and you bring the emotions to life so well. I am especially enjoying your interpretations of the different characters, they're really unique! You portray Victoria as the tragic queen very well and I like that you also gave her a fiery side. You definitely feel for her in this story, poor thing. And Plato as the cocky yet likable playboy works very well too, I'd say that fits him nicely. And as you can probably tell by my profile pic Jemima's my favorite and I totally buy her as a coy little lolita; definitely not the typical portrayal of her at all, but I like it! :)

Keep it up! You're doing a great job! Go Platoria!

I love your writing skill, I actually cried at one point :D
I feel Victoria's pain and how Bustopher Jones won't let her forget.

Please continue this story, its AMAZING XD

Beautiful imagery :) I applaud you for your skill in writing figurative language. Kind of an expected review from me, but I just had to say it!
Okay, I just absolutely LOVE how you created this atmosphere of calmness and quiet curiousity (don't know if that makes sense, but I'm saying it!) at the beginning, and then BJ just breaks the silence by hollering "Victoria, darling!" xD And the flinch after that had perfect timing :D
Oh goodness...the second he said "William would be proud" I literally smacked myself in the forehead. So this is like the part of the summary where you said "her father won't let her forget it".
OH GOODNESS GRACIOUS QUIT TALKING ABOUT HIM! I know he probably misses him and everything, and it's really sad that he died, but he's kinda making everything worse :( Oh, and when I said quit talking about him, I was talking to Bustopher xD I didn't mean that YOU should stop talking about him...agh I'M SO AWKWARD WITH WORDS. The writing and everything is great, it's just the character that makes me mad, which is good...I think you get the picture ;)
Whoa...your writing is so good I can feel Vicky's pain...my heart breaks for her :(
COME AND MAKE HER FEEL BETTER, PLATO! :(
Haha anyway, needless to say, I love this chapter to bits. I can't say enough good things about your writing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay I'm so glad you continued this story! And as always your writing is amazing, great descriptions and emotions. I don't know why but I really like the idea of Bustopher Jones being Victoria's daddy... it's cute (: I loved their interactions and the fact that he was so protective of her. I can understand why she's so frustrated and that she just wants to move on from the past.
I hope you update this soon! I can't wait for the next chapter when the other cats come in. I'm really interested to see how you'll write them all. But yeah awesome chapter! :D

Aw, poor Victoria! I always saw her as a sensitive and thoughtful queen, so the death of her brother must be really, really tragic and especially hard on her :(

Everlasting Cat, AND she lost her mother? That's so sad...

All the emotions were brilliantly portrayed in this chapter! I can definitely see how Victoria is trying to keep her emotions kind of locked in and how Bustopher can't help but let his emotions out, plus I'm sure Munkustrap is feeling kind of awkward being in the middle of all this. He's probably not as sensitive as some other cats, but he's trying his best to comfort Bustopher. Wait...did that make any sense? Ah, well, it made sense in my head, and, uh, it was a compliment, so yeah :) haha.

And, uh, you know how much I love Platoria...hehe...so you can imagine how happy this story will make me feel :) Haha I take these pairings very seriously haha.

Once again, you have a very professional style of writing. Update soon!

This story really interests me! You should definitely continue it.

Poor Victoria and Bustopher :( I wonder how William died? You portrayed their sadness so well, too. There were so many details and really great descriptions!

Please update soon!