It’s a good story, you were definitely into something, but you shouldn’t be afraid to use contractions. They allow the story to have a better flow. Good concept here though!

Thanks for sharing this story I really enjoyed reading it...

Oh my God, I absolutely love this story! I'm also an Everlark Addict like you so that's why I just can't stop reading :D. Awesome storyline and the perfect relationship created :D

I guess thats Finnick. It would be so overwhelming if it is him.

Haymich is Amazing! As always. No pun intended.

Beautiful story-truly a romantic one!
So glad that Gale kidnapped Peeta-he actually did him a favor. That way he was out of Delly's hands! Luckily Katniss found him and got him out of there. Such a good life for the all...

That was literally the best thing I've ever read in my life! You should really get into writing and becoming a professional author, you're a great writer. I love the story so much, this is definitely my favorite fanfic ever! It's my favorite book actually! (even if it's not real book) You should really think about getting this printed in paperback and publishing it! I would definitely buy it, and hope to get a signed copy! Never stop writing! If you believe in yourself you can do it! I know you can definitely become professional author some day.

With love,
Percabeth418

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYMMMMMMMIIIIIITTTTTCCCCHHHHH I CALLED I KNEW HE WOULD COME IN

Ok it just caught my attention and I had to ask but WHY IS DARIUS GALES BUTLER?!

I love how you add small details from the original books and connecting the two worlds together I would have never thought to do that

I thought Annie had red hair. Hmm whatever, love the story! 3 3

I bet it's Finnick. Love this so.. see y'all in 10 years?

Katniss and Peeta's son is nameless lol. Kind of wondering what happened to Delly Cartwright... Did the Mellark Patriarchs end up becoming their servants? Or did the money Gale gave Peeta's mother get them out of that pickle? Thanks for the HEA ending :)

Would have been interesting to see a return to 12 but otherwise perfect. Well written and an interesting plot

I've finished reading your story and I just wanna say thank you for writing was by far the best everlark fanfic I have ever read and you did an amazing job on it so thank you!
Much luv,
Gabby (Everlark 4ever)