I hope you are still planning to finish this...
After all, it has been around 4 years since your last update, but you did return after a 6 year break, so I'm still hoping for that update :)
It is a very interesting and unique story!
I'll be reading whenever you update!
Keep up the awesomeness!

Wow. That was interesting how long it took Kaiba to realize that she had been broken. I would have figured he would be used to seeing that. Anyways, it was awesome how you kept leading back to how she reminded him of his past as well as the tying in of Egypt, especially Ryou's yami. Awesome job! Please update soon!

-D101

The way you slowed down the pacing for when she was falling was awesome! Although I can't help but wonder if the last few moments were a vision of the past or if Kaiba's program suddenly started working overtime. I'm leaning towards the vision part. Anyways, again I really enjoyed the way you were able to keep the two POV's from merging. It was awesome!

-d101

Wow. I guess Ryou is in for a rough ride, as is Nadia. Just something I noticed though, in the previous chapter you said class ended at 3:45. Here you said 3:50. Just a little thing I noticed. Anyways, Jonouchi's attempt to make friends was amusing, although I would have thought Yugi would make the first move. Anyways, awesome job!

-D101

The poems at the start are a nice touch. It's neat how they give you a bit of an insight to Kaiba. It was fun to see things from Nadia's POV and how she felt being the new kid. I'm a bit surprised that the other people didn't realize she might not know Japanese but of course I've never been a student overseas so I have no clue how people act when dealing with a new student from overseas. Anyways, awesome job!

-D101

Hi. I'm just rereading because I thought this was a very interesting idea and I haven't seen anyone try to take up the challenge. Also, I enjoyed how you kept it third person but showed it from Kaiba's pointed view. It was fun to read though his thoughts without reading, "he thinks" or "he wondered" repeatedly. Also I couldn't log in and leave a review since I already did that. Anyways, I'm going to continue rereading and hope you update at some point because I would love to see this completed. But if you are unable to, that's cool too.

-D101

Wow, I absolutely love thus! The idea of how Kaiba would have turned out if Mokuba had never been around is one I hadn't really put much thought into, but it does make a lot of sense that he'd be even colder and seemingly more heartless than normal. You really did a great job with his character, especially sense I've frequently heard that keeping him in character is no easy task. I just love how Nadia's able to get to Seto, even when he's broken her, though I have to admit that it's a sad sight to see so I hope that she'll either snap out of t on her own eventually. OK, so that's usually a hard task to manage, but maybe someone will help her get her fire back. I really hope you haven't given up on this because I'd just love to see how it all turns out in the end.

I absolutely love this story! Update soon!

Interesting. I'm glad that she is okay though. Please update soon!

-D101

wow Your really good in writting I hope you update this D

Oh wow. Awesome job!

-D101

I thought Jonouchi had brown eyes. Anyways, nicely done. I wonder what Kaiba has planned. Awesome job!

-D101

O.o You updated! yay!

Good luck to Naida. I think she'll need it. Anyways, awesome job!

-d101

Interesting. I'm glad that you decided to come back to the story so that newer readers can see it. I was just wondering, is the company still a war-machine making one? Or has he turned it into a game company? Anyways, awesome job. I look forward to reading more.

-D101