| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Elven Legacy |
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   spider2016 chapter 2 . 2/23/2018 update soon |
| cyiusblack chapter 2 . 8/26/2016 update soon |
| Currahee506 chapter 2 . 6/16/2015 More plesse |
| kelwin chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 good fic |
| MasterShadowAssassin chapter 2 . 11/25/2013 Love the story been a year since the last update hope you update soon-MSA |
| ShadowStalker1389 chapter 2 . 9/29/2013 Great story i hope you update soon |
| Hencojan chapter 2 . 7/15/2013 Discontinued? |
| PaC chapter 2 . 6/20/2013 Adoptobandoned so I won't say much. Interesting, overall writing not too bad but hard to know how much is yours and how much is just a bare bone edit of "Harry and the Elven Prophecy Author: Dark Hearted Dragon's Master Words: 5,059 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 89 - Follows: 122 - Updated: 11-08-11 - Published: 10-22-11 - id: 7485457 The biggest problem is it's pretty disjointed and the reader is a bit dumbfounded on getting tiny bits of background that the story barely makes much sense in terms of the reader understanding what is happening. "RUSHED" without enough filler and background perhaps is the biggest problem. Since the story is probably adoptobandoned I won't bother saying more. |
| wer2103 chapter 2 . 12/29/2012 Good story |
| TidusFFX1997 chapter 2 . 10/11/2012 Hurry up and update |
| Toby860 chapter 2 . 7/31/2012 Not that bad. |
| Hivedragon chapter 2 . 7/17/2012 Well Ill be looking forward how you are going to continue this. |
| Daphne-Greengrass-Potter-fan chapter 2 . 7/7/2012 the story is AMAZING so far cant wait 4 more i cant wait 2 see what other forms harry hasas well as the magical properties of the wolf form |
| iMTheStormKing chapter 2 . 6/24/2012 Awesome start to a story! cant wait for the next chap... Hope you update again soon.. |
| aSecondStory chapter 2 . 6/16/2012 Hey. So, definitly interesting and verymuch interested in reading more. However I must point out that it got really confunsing from the point harry first left the cabin. It seemed kinda rushed and mixed up. For example all the the chasers knowing and being cordinal with Malfoy. Harry and su seeming to know each other previously. That whole scene was rather confusing. Kinda felt like it spring from no where. I look forward to see how you continue. |
