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Too beautiful and wonderful for words. Damn you for making me cry. You have a gift. :)

Wow. Sad.

Oh my gosh! this is just so... wow! Oh how I wish this had actually happened!

This is incredible writing. I absolutely love every word. I don't usually leave reviews on the stories I read, but the emotion and sincerity of this story captured my heart. :) This passage especially, I think, is absolutely perfect:

"'Megamind-' Roxanne managed, unable to speak properly. She trembled under his touch, his gaze. She can't think straight, and the leather is cool on her face. It's dizzying, being with him like this – and confusing, conflicting. Her body aches for him in ways that are so physical and carnal – a yearning that hasn't been satisfied for years. Her heart reached for him, wanted him. It was her mind that stopped her, her logical, analytical side that screamed at her to listen to reason and step back from this madness – that this wasn't a possibility that could ever, ever be entertained. She brushes the back of her hand against his cheek, teasing herself with the touch of his skin."

Keep writing. You have an incredible gift. It was everything this movie, these characters, and this storyline needed. Basically, it was everything that should have happened. With the ultimate balance of angst and hope, you have done the 'rain scene' proud. It's seriously the best post-break-up Megamind one-shot I have ever read.

My gosh, so sad...

this was just excellent. such raw pain and desperation.. wonderful job.

I'm hoping you're the same person who uploaded this on LiveJournal...

So sad but brilliantly written.