Very good! I like it!

No shit, Sherlock

They better not die!

I love it! It’s soooo good I have to keep reading it over and over... Also I love the revelation. It’s awesomely unique!

So far I like it!

Ohmygosh! It's been exactly a year since I last read this as a Guest! So glad to finally find this again!

my friend and i were browsing danny phantom phan art and we come across a cover for a fanfic called "earthquake" so i read it and it was good, so im happy i read it.

why am i telling you this

"Okay, it was a crappy ending, I guess." You GUESS! It's DEFINITELY crappy. Oh well. Still good fic.

Uhh... Danny? This may be some kind of problem for you and you probably know it but Dash is starting to find the missing pieces of the puzzle. Loving the Dash views though so far! It actually gave me a fright when Danny's eyes were you-know-what to my surprise. Good job! Hope to see more wonerful DP stories from you later in the future. Maybe if Nick is rebooting/continuing DP they could hire you to be one of the writers.

Argh! Dash in these kind of stories notice too much... That's why I read them though surprisingly. Even though I rather have the secret identity secret.

really good

AWESOME BEGINNING!

This was good, job :)

I liked this story the only critique is that you use the term 'halfa' waaaay too much especially since Dash doesn't even know yet

Dash just had to push it!