That was awesome and you should write more of these...

awe

cute and hot at the same time

I liked it. Loved the emotion. But I was surprised by the last para. What was this place, Brigadoon? ;)

Awesome! Cant wait for more!

Very interesting first chapter! Nicely written and good plot.

Looking forward to more.

Hmmmm, Dean, Why do you have a picture of Sam? ;)

So wait, what happened?

I like the story so far, it would make a decent cover story. And I could see Dean doing that...

I'm so glad there's going to be more of this one. Excellent story and characterization. I'm really enjoying it. :)