| Reviews for The Voice Within |
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   The Wise Dragoness chapter 8 . 8/24/2019 So, I love the story so far. But, you do have some grammatical errors. I'm quite sure that you did not mean to say she "sighed in contempt," but rather, "she sighed in contentment." Unless she does actually hate Legolas and I've been reading this wrong. |
| margie-me chapter 11 . 7/30/2019 I agree with Juliet far more than Legolas on this issue, but it is understandable. Since she has literally "come back from the dead, twice", one must surmise that something hidden is at play here. I hope their disagreement doesn't place a restraint on their budding relationship. A'maelamin, is it? |
| margie-me chapter 5 . 7/29/2019 Beautiful job describing this battle. It was all breathless movement and action. Had he seen her, Boromir would've been pleased with Juliet's acquitting herself so well. Since the Orcs were specifically after the Hobbits, I suppose that fact also saved her life! Her reactions afterwards rang true, too. |
| margie-me chapter 4 . 7/29/2019 This is very interesting. How long before the source is discovered, and if it is connected to Juliet's appearance in Middle Earth? And why only Legolas? |
| Mari Lg13 chapter 11 . 7/28/2019 OMG I need the next charter now! I just found this story today and devoured it! Love it! Will be waiting for the next chapter! |
| Shetan20 chapter 1 . 7/27/2019 Thank you for an enjoyable chapter. |
| TheSunRiseGiraffe chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 I love this story so far, best one I have read in a long time, I’m excited to read more. |
| MillersMoonPrincess chapter 8 . 6/22/2019 I really like this story. keep up the good work |
| JulsaIthil chapter 7 . 6/21/2019 Posting this for the 8’th chapter because FFN won’t let me post a second one. Yep this one is better. Also the ‘I’ in in the part about finding wood. Shouldn’t it be ‘It’? |
| JulsaIthil chapter 8 . 6/20/2019 Why? Why haven’t I seen this before? I’ve been surfing through FFN on the LotR archive sometimes searching for Legomance stories. I love it! I kinda like how you made here supposedly die, to me her fake death shows weakness so she’s not a Mary Sue. The thoughts and emotions before she revived also makes it seem that she really died and it makes her revival—... know what, the whole point is that she doesn’t seem to be a Mary Sue. |
| earthdragon chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 A good start to this. However, I do wonder how that mysterious female was able to trespass into Lothlórien without being stopped by the March-wardens, who would be on high alert on the borders. I would have thought that unless she possesses the power of invisibility, she would have been detected immediately. Certainly Galadriel would have known of her presence and alerted the wardens. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/13/2014 so cute! |
| Legendary Heroes.96 chapter 21 . 2/13/2014 This was an awesome story! |
| Princess Peridot chapter 21 . 11/30/2013 This was a great story. A couple chapters even brought me to tears. I hope you write many more as well as this. |
| Snow Tempest chapter 10 . 6/14/2013 Aya! Such wonders! You truly are an excelent writer! Snow |
