AWWWW I thought is was just gonna be really sad but no he's there! .

I love this! This is perfectly John, perfectly painful and sad and...sweet. Thanks fir writing it.

Oh my god. That. Was. Beautiful.
I'm pretty sure that is my favorite fanfic that I have ever read. And I read a lot of them!
I don't know if you've written anything else, but please please PLEASE do! And pm me when you do...

Oh my god, this was amazing and well written and adorable.

Oh my goodness me, this was...wow. I loved the mathematical view on his life; I may be biased because of my hatred for maths, but it came across to me as if John wasn't letting himself feel by keeping things very logical. I loved the way you didn't mention the word dead once, as if John was unwilling, or unable to admit that Sherlock had 'died'. It was like he was hoping Sherlock had just gone for a bit, and would be back soon, and it was all the more powerful for it. And then the end came and I gasped and a silly smile spread across my face.
Also, I loved your writing style. I've always been a fan of I've always been a fan of the short, snappy sentences sort of style and here it shines and goes hand in hand with the sort of logical, mathematical view he has here.
I don't know if this was a oneshot, but if you write any more of it I would very gladly read it.

Oh how wonderful!
A happy ending.

Either that or Sarah bought him a dog.

:)

Absolutely incredible. Very sad as I read it through, and I founding really enjoyed the twist. :) Good characterization, and really good imagery!

This is absolutely brilliant. I love it it is so sad and invokes so many feelings: first there was sadness and then hope, then just "yes!.." Wonderful. Thank you so much!

I absolutely loved your fanfic- I think it's my absolute favorite now. It's sad, but I find that I'm actually quite fond of the sad ones- especially the ones that can make me cry. And I bawled my eyes out reading this one. :)

The whole mathematical view on John's life was creative. It ripped my heart into tiny pieces, but I enjoyed it. :D

Brilliantly written. That was brilliant.

Sorry for the lack constructive criticism- I'm not the best at that. I am good at proclaiming my undying love for fanfics, though. :)

Wow. That was ... amazing!

I like the way you interlaced his 'normal' life with these moments, and then finally ...

Thanks for sharing

Beautifully well written and desperately sad.

Are you going to continue it? Because that's one hell of a cliffhanger and this is really good.

I love your writing style and it's brilliant.