Aww. Love Optimus/ Elita! I'd love to see more :D

Oohhhhh
Dis is niiiiiiiiiice
Could u do another chappie? Pwetty pwease!
XD

Why must you write such awesome fics, but only tease us with only a single chapter? DX

Its cus you're evil.

And we love you for it.

this has real potential1..please update soon! I love the different take on the bonding of Elita and Optimus

It's nice. I think you have a great talent for focusing on the little details and then pulling back and showing the rest of the scene.

PLEN WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE. PLEN WOULD VERY MUCH LIKE TO SEE MORE.

There's something fascinating about sticking Cybertron in the context of a monarchial society. I don't know what it is, but I love it XD AND I LOVE THIS. It's a very unique and interesting plot, and I really want to see what you can do with it. You're a great writer, you know that? Like a really, REALLY great writer!

What'll be most interesting is seeing how Elita adapts to her new role. It would be frustrating to go from a borderline no-name soldier to the most prestigious female on the face of the planet. As an author, I smell LOTS OF ROOM FOR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT :D

And I'm DYING to see how she and Optimus come to fall in love with one another. I love the idea of their relationship being turned backwards-bonding and then love? The nerve of some writers! XD Please, please, please keep developing this story, I'm dying for more :3

Plen

push it. Keep going. If I think of something, I'll drop it. But honestly, you do so well on your own.

_ that was adorable!