Excellent!

Omg I'm late to the story and sorry I didn't review every chapter (normally that's what i do) but I read this all in 2 days. I'm not sorry for the lack of sleep lol but dang you write so well. You add emotion and more depth to each character, the part where leliana makes up with Alyssa and Zevran has the crossbow aimed... just wow. Whole new insight and that it's not ok that a friendship was broke. And now Zev with the ring... ugh! The feels!

Excellent!

Excellent!

Fantastic!

Excellent!

Excellent!

Wonderful! Need more! I love this Warden.

Must say, it thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Had me laughing along with Zev at the end because that is most certainly something I would blurt out. Can't wait for the next chapter

I love the Inigo Montoya allusion Alyssa uses here! And the way she handles the situation is done really well. It makes so much sense that she'd get this riled up, but then to have her reconsider it is a good way to handle it all. I also like Zevran's perspective on it all, and the fact he wants a snack to nibble on during the entertainment. Good characterization there :)

Two Dwarves in a dog suit - LMFAO! You have said some pretty hilarious and drool creating things in this fic, and this along with 'magic kills, knives kill, small children launched at great speeds kill' omg I was in stitches. You write wonderfully. Alyssa really put her foot in it, my lip twitched with wanting to cry - poor Zevran - she better fix this fast! Anyway, great chapter as usual. Keep it up.

Serpentess.

Excellent!

SQUEE!

So much fun, so much sexy, so much wonderful.

yeah, no one can resist a curvy girl for long Zev ;-)

Leave it to Zevran to be able to show her that not all that is dark is evil