interesting. i like it. everyone has their demons.

Okay that was terrific yet i am not trying to flame but it was a bit confusing. My recomendation if u dont mind me putting one in is that u do a line break then the name of the person then another line break.. but otherwise this was my fave fanfic. I cant follow or fave cuz i dont have an account but if i did i would so fave this.

do a sequel!

You know what I adore about this? How the reader knows right away who is narrating the story. And the writing. It's perfect.

I loved this so much!

I love this one as much as I loved Coming Home (that I didn't review because I don't have anything outstanding to say, sorry '). Yet it is totally different.
These two texts show beautifully the human complexity - the determination, the will, the psychological strenght of human beings opposed to their self-esteem problems, their difficulties to fit and to value themselves.
I love that anyone of them has doubts. Each of them thinks s/he is not worth what is giving to them, but (or is it thusly? I think it's thusly, because it's good and great and unique and we all are greedy for good things that do us good and make us feel as good) try their hardest to be worthy.
Thor PoV left me speechless - and Tony's twisted my guts, Clint's made my heart whine pitifully, Steve's broke something, Bruce's angered and brutally saddened me and Tasha's... ended me. It was amazing.
You must never cease to write, you're really gifted with words and images. It makes me want to translate it in my tongue, but I'd never be able to render it as beautiful as it is in yours.
Thank you!

Great fic!

Caity :)

This made me cry. As in sobbing.

Very well written! You never give names but at the same times it's excedingly clear who each person thinking is! :D

You did a very good job conveying each ones personal feelings and thoughts, while characterizing them to where we know which hero we're reading about.

loved it :)

This is awesome! I loved reading their innermost feelings. and guessing who was who was fun :)

Wow, this is great. They all think they're the one with problems and cause pains. With great characterisation, we know which character we each refer to. It's a surprising insight into Thor because other fics hardly explore his feeling. I know how to solve this, group therapy! :)

Favourited!

I've been following your work for a while now, and you've never failed to completely blow my mind away - but I think, if I had to pick, that this fiction was your crowning jewel.

The Avengers are, above all, a team - and a fine one at that. But at the same time, a team is made up of individuals, each with their own unique fears and struggles - something you portrayed quite beautifully here. Perhaps even more intriguingly, the fallacies that you chose, while highly individualized, all pertained to contributing to the team or keeping it alive. They showed that at its most basic level, at the cornerstone, the Avengers are a one unit, one team.

I hope to see more stories/updates from you soon! :)

From the desk of the Black Cat

Omg my poor babies :'(

Bruce's one in particular was heartbreaking, and really in character.

This is just awesome. Every character is just captured so accurately and perfectly. It's like you looked at them and dragged their issues out into the open. Great writing!