owo whats this

2 hot 2 handle. Reminds me of my moms cooking, just
Thrice as nice, mmmmmhmmm

I love it.

Oh gosh, poor Ness. Still, this is really well written. I wish I could see more of your writing.

Every other time I've read a fanfic, I've read it once. Perhaps, if I enjoy it, I'll read it again in the future, but never twice in a row. I did with this fic. Everything about it was spot on. Porky's dialog was amazingly in character, and unsettling. Merely reading the fic, I felt incredibly uncomfortable, and the fact that it wasn't canon quickly left my mind. Ness' accent worked well, making "Pokey" a result of said accent was a nice touch, and his reaction to... It was accurate. The part about the first kiss hit hard. Not only because of who it belonged to, but how it happened. And the fact that despite what had occurred... Occurred and Ness was still able to gather himself and go rescue a complete stranger was in character and just amazing on his part. I applaud you, fanfic writer, for instilling the unsettled feelings in me that nothing else could.

I will say it again Porky you are a sick little bastard

Wow. I always wondered what it would be like if... *shivers* Poor Ness...
I like the story though. Very good word choice.

Are you going to continue? I'd very much like it if you continued this! :D
PM me please if you already have a sequel!

-TechnoFool

I must really be numb if the most I thought while reading this was noticing the few mistakes that were in it. I'm sure I'll feel like throwing up later, but for now I say good job. Makes me wonder how Ness was able to look like he hadn't been molested at all after this.

Oh...My...God...I know this is really weird and creepy for me to say this but in a way that was kinda...hot! What happens next? Does Pokey kidnap him? I need to know!