Beautiful story

Excellent

How can I refuse review Nutella?

Although I gotta admit that I'm cheating, because I've just read all of your stories, and I'm only leaving a review on one... and it's this one not really because of the story, but because the review request may be one of the best I've ever read )

So anyway, totally outside being a superhero-jedi-ninja-wizard by night, I like your writing style. Your stories aren't long, but you capture scenes and emotion well in the space that you use. Which really, I think takes more skill (or skillz if your ninja side prefers) than just tossing a ton of words down on the page and hoping that some of them hit.

Favourite story? Hard... I enjoy each while I'm reading it. Maybe 'A dash of romance' or 'The mundane things'? I think the key that you've captured in each is what I think about H/Hr... that with them it isn't really about OMG He's the HAWTNESS!11!1! or all of a sudden she has a makeover and he notices her. Not to say that they aren't attractive or whatever, but it isn't what ties them together. Which is good, because if you think of it they're probably settling down into a relationship for the next 100 years and physical attraction is only going to get you so far. So I think you capture that really well.

Oddly, I think that's a mistake that JKR makes in the books. Because I know better than the famous author, right? In her own books, right? )

Yeah.

I'll stop ranting now.

Keep writing!

Oh, so this is time...ahahaha...again I repeat, lyrical and poetic...

LOL, you have trouble writing longer things? I can't seem to write anything short and it's frustrating...

I found this one shot lyrical since it evolves around 'Time' and it just made perfect sense to each one...although I kinda expected to get a POV of Hermione where she says...'Time taught me that all good things come to those who wait'...When I read the books I always felt like Hermione was just waiting for Harry to realize that she's there...LOL

Poetic since it's short but says so many things.

BTW: I love that you don't bash. I have problems with authors bashing characters, so yeah thank you for that...)

I like your writing, so now I'm going to go back and read most (if not all) of your stories and review most (if not all) of those. So consider this fair warning that I'm a bit of a pedantic asshole. JKR's middle name is Kathleen. See? I'm sorry, I can't help it.

But I'm not pedantic enough for that to ruin my enjoyment of your story, and I did enjoy it quite a bit. Surprisingly mature Weasleys, which is fun to see from time to time (although they're more interesting when they're bullshit-y). Good job. Although I agree with some of your other reviewers: Hermione's point of view is the only thing missing

Just wanted to tell you that this story made me smile after a particularly awful day at work. Thank you.

Yes Nutella is awesome.

So's you fan fic :)

Wow I can't believe Ron took it so well! Great fic!

Love it! I like Ron's part especially! I hardly ever see him like this. Usually I see him as a jealous git who acts like a petulant child who didn't get his way. I really enjoyed this! Great job!

Nice. I just needed a quick read before going to bed, got it!

Thanks a lot :) !

Nutella is good! :D damn, I need Nutella now..

Great post

I love Nutella too!

Until next time

Gloria

That was brilliant! I love how you choose to stick to a understanding and caring Ron and Ginny (bonus point!) and really i love every words of this story ] it was fluffy and warm and genius x]

That was awesome. I love those two together! Anyway, I know the feeling your talking about. Nutella is the greatest spreading ever :)

I would never deny you the sheer bliss that is nutella. :) Have some sweetness! Speaking of sweet, this story was like eating a chocolate covered strawberry. Mostly sweet, with a little bit of tartness, in the form of Ginny-angst. I loved it. 10/10