Thank you for introducing me to the drama button. I even downloaded an app. _

I absolutely, positively adore the writing style in this and I've not even gotten past ch. 1 yet! XD

Yeah, I was going to tell you... I can't read all of it clearly - I've got a basic reading knowledge of Spanish myself, so sometimes colloquialisms and slang are beyond me - but that's definitely not what it means. If you need anything translated into Spanish in the future, let me know. If I can't help, I have friends who are fluent who can.

Just fyi. This is hilarious.

Very amusing, funny and light. The author's notes were very humorous. I enjoyed it.

I would like to see the map /
This story is so awesome and funny I would like to read it on LJ but I was unable to find the link *cry a river*

This story was great and had a wonderful ending.

Thanks for all six chapters, Happy Mothers Day!

Great story, please update soon.

"...was genuinely talented in the arts of healing and magic, in fact, he was a progeny, " do you mean prodigy? Il me semble que vous parlez bien francais, charlie D

Beryl is awsome! The vision I had of her chanting an incantation & waving her arms around was hilarious. This story is making me smile, which is nice.

That 'conversation' between Serena and Darien while he was up front was so fucking funny. I'm still dying of laughter here. I always find it funny how in anime and movies and stuff, the characters are in situations where they shouldn't be able to have a proper conversation and they still somehow manage to. Thank you so much for the update. Loving this way too much hahaha.

I love the story, I really do, but I have a problem with ur random blabing and complaining and going WAY off topic. It's too distracting and it keeps the reader away from the story. I'm not flaming ur story, no. I'm just saying keep to the story because it's good. Readers don't really care if u use a word or phrase repeatedly, authors do it all the time. It's to make a point.

I swear I love the 'Princess bride' (movie) and quite frankly... THIS JUST MAKES IT ALL THE MORE HILARIOUS! though have you thought about putting in the 'INCONCIVABLE!' jokes in every now and then... because well... that would be COMIDY GOLD! . just a suggestion :P

I love your version of The Princess Bride but is it me or your rumblings are getting longer and the story in the chapters are getting shorter? :/

I rarely write reviews these days but this was such a treat that I just had to. I hadn't even heard of Princess Bride before this story so it's a totally new experience for me. I love your commentary being a part of the story because let's face it as readers. It makes the reading experience just that much more fun. I'm so excited to read more and to find out about what happened to Darien. No I'm not going to read the book/ watch the movie because I'm so enraptured by your version that I will not spoil the surprises coming. :P

Also, please update Hooligans. It's like my fave fanfic as of this moment. I've read it so many times already I practically have some of the scenes memorized.