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I absolutely LOVE this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEAAAASEEEEE tell me there's more!

Such a cute idea. Made my heart melt there. I love the interaction between those two. Lovely story.

This was so interesting! Gosh~I may do some fanart on it!

Now I'm curious about 'The Dollmaker" fic XD!

I adore this! It's so sweet and you've captured Lee's childlike personality perfectly. I love that you don't let Gaara speak, if you had it would have possibly ruined the slightly off-kilter, fantastical - though that's probably not quite the word I want - feeling that runs through this piece. Even Under-My-Bed san had amazing character, and Nana is a great OC. You could make a lovely original story out of this.

"Behold! I return! My apologies for my long absence, but first I had family issues to deal with, then I went to America, and then my RPG Com restarted so I've been busy with moderating it."umhm,yes lovely...why did you even go through the trouble of submitting anyways,infact dont bother in the future with that,and please dont write your sob story for the whole world to see,and then you get pissed off when somebody mentions your own anounced words,so please stop with this melodrama of yours !

"Behold! I return! My apologies for my long absence, but first I had family issues to deal with, then I went to America, and then my RPG Com restarted so I've been busy with moderating it."

.umhmhmh,yes lovely,...why did you bother to update now anyway,infact dont bother to do so inthe future,and please dont give your sob story on the site like that,next thing you know you will be pissed off when somebody mentions your melodrama .

This made me... Sad!

It's really good.

I love how you've woven magic realism in Lee's POV and I love how even Nana seems to participate in it, albeit she's a bit hostile. And I love how everyone thinks Lee's a bit crazy.

This is a lovely beginning to their friendship and you should definitely write more about Lee and Gaara's adventures. It feels like Jake and Finn or like Calvin and Hobbes, except they're a much deadlier pair.

Also, baku reference!

At first I didn't really get it, but as I read on it made sense. It is a very sweet story! :)

This one was so interesting. I love everything from Under-The-Bed-San to Gaara to Nana to how you characterised Lee. Okay, the last one really made me smile. What I'm trying to say is that the way you write Rock Lee is so awesome. XD It was cute; Lee even paid attention to the little details by even giving Gaara lines on his palm. Good job! *claps*

This was so cute! I really loved it! And the ending was beautiful!

If you have half her skill she must be fucking amazing

I am probably being an incredible idiot right now, but I am so confused! I really enjoyed the story. It held my attention, even though the dog was running around like crazy at my feet. I just do not understand the ending.