This story made me get the Mohawk customization. Playing SI now. Loving Nikos.

This fic makes me want to drop everything and play a SI *right now* and run around with Andronikos. Woof.

I love how the whole don't-get-too-close thing expresses something a lot more complicated than PWP. Not that there's anything wrong with that!

"I'll be right back." Why do I suspect he won't? In other news: Much better than last chapter, if somewhat sad. It does leave me wondering: How did Corso get Ryli over the whole anti-gentle thing? Nikos' idea that he would probably cry if he was rough (in Catching Up) was really on the mark.

I must respectfully disagree with Ms. Ash... this chapter was just lovely. OF COURSE Ryli and Nikos can't work out! Because FSMUGGLER BELONGS WITH CORSO, OKAY?

*squee*

Despite all the sex (which was mind-blowingly fantastic!) this chapter was actually kind of heartbreaking. Poor Nikos, poor Ryli! :(

I have some constructive criticism of this chapter. It's pretty darn good- the chase was very cute, and Ryli's retribution was hot. But about halfway through the bondage scene, it seemed like you lost your stream. It just kinda drops off, and ends on a weak note. Hope this helps in the future.

Oh man I am loving this story. I really like the interaction between these two - so hot and fun. I'm glad you decided to expand on this. :)

Okay, I don't know what music you had going on in your head with a "heavy beat" but I was all over Massive Attack's "Pray for Rain." Just saying. This was ridiculously hot. Damn it.

YAY! And whoaaa. How can you maintain such levels of hotness without combustion?

Hehe that's a great one-shot!

Whaaa. That was hot. But... I REALLY WANNA SEE CORSO AND THE SITH. Pretty please?