WoW! I really enjoyed reading this!

Oh wow! I've read a few fics where Silas does evil things to Breakdown's body, but this is the first I think I've read where he assaults Optimus! By proxy, even; and isn't Nemesis a lovely puppet! I was purring the entire time I read this fic, but the moment where Silas lost control and Optimus broke free straight away- THAT moment I had to stifle a shriek! I loved seeing Optimus with so much control over himself, so that even as he's overloading, he still has mind and focus enough to seize his chance. That last paragraph left me feeling pumped, like even though it's the end, it's not? I'm not sure how to explain it XD sorry! Weh, yes, it's a lovely fic and I'm really happy to see creepy!Silas at his best!

Dayyuumm! Sequel! Sequel!

Clone-cest...Awesome!

because I'm lazy and don't wanna log in haha. Damn and holy crap! D: Silas is one evil sick minded dude. Will you do a follow up on this please? Or...at least a sequel?

Whew . . . this had me thinking about Silas' comment when he stabs Prime a totally different way. Awesome job.

Shufxsjlncdslljdrazgjlnfg this is just amazing! I don't know to describe this coherently XD I feel bad for Optimus because it got recorded D;

That Silas. Totally recording and all.

Oh Optimus, bby. ):

I'm watching you for more of this stuff.

I really like this fanfic it's the first one I've seen of nemesis prime from transformers prime and you posted it so fast I'm kind of a little jealous that you got it up so quickly. you're writing of the story was also really well done you were able to articulate dialogue between both optimus, Silas, and the robotic nemesis so well and it was incredibly good to read.

This is a really good story for your first fanfic great job.

Wow! That was very intense! Poor Optimus, be a test subject again was very very unpleasant... But I am glad tha he was free in the end a d bate again but in the same time bad news for him now that MECH recorded that scene X_X.

Excellent work, my friend! I really really enjoyed! You rock! Keep going with the excellent work! See you around! w