Loved it

Overall, I enjoyed this story. One continuity thing I noticed is when you have Kate and Rick talking by her desk you say "the boys are out," and then about two paragraphs down as the enter the interrogation room you describe Kate as telling them to stay put. It kind of took me out of the story and I had to go back to make sure I didn't miss something. Not anything that would keep me from liking the story though.

Great job. Keep on writing.

Tia

Here is another one that is more like what I picture when Caskett actually deals with this whole thing. I love that now she has to woo (you put 'woe' just FYI) him. So will there be a sequal? :)

This was cute :) I enjoyed very much

I liked this. I especially liked how she had to employ her best interrogation-room techniques to make the confrontation work. This line was insightful into his behavior: "in a flash her hand leaves its perch on the table and finds the center of his chest to push him back down. "No. Sit and listen and for once stop making up stories in your head," she orders him"

I only found three little typos. The last one was woe when you meant woo (at the end). I'll leave you to find the other 2.

Bravo. Now this is something completely different from the rest of the stories out there post the last few episodes.

A possessive and demanding Castle and a forceful and emotional Veckett. How I would have loved to see the writers come up with something as innovative or atleast different as this. Instead of the 5 year old passive aggressive Castle going back to his ol playboy ways and hurting Kate in the process. And New York's finest detective unable to put the clues together and find out what the reason is for him acting so differently instead of questioning his padt, his ILU and his commitment to her over the last few years.

Sigh. The way you put it across, the hurt, the anger, the guilt and the subsequent love from the twi characters was much more realistic and enriching then what they have done on the show. Kudos to you for it. Hope you write more.

Regards,Will

This is so very great and I have to say, the impact of the last two episodes has brought out a lot of people who either hadn't written in a long time, hadn't written any fanfic before or even first-time writers.

I love how you've had Kate finally confront Castle, instead of relying on sub-text, glances etc. Here's to hoping you'll be writing more in the future.

Really good. I liked this a lot