This is an awesome story! I like it a lot. But since you haven't updated it in two years, I'm assuming it's abandoned. So I have a request to make. You said that you were rewriting this story, so there's a possibility that there were more chapters before you began the rewrite. If there were, and you still have them, would you mind reposting them?

This is an intresting story, not many stories with this kind of paring. I think you should have a spar between Percy and Reyna take it a bit extreme. Is this after the giant war or before?
Looking forward at how this story develops

MOAR. I. WANT. MOAR!

But only after you've finished your exams. :P I love this chapter.

Keep up the good work.

Jupiter.

Is this an AU where Percy spends a decent amount of time before the Argo II comes to New Rome?

It turned out perfectly fine, don't worry. I loved it, although it kinda left me wanting some more interactions and stuff. Not a really fluffy kind of interaction, but just more bonding interactions. Good work!

That started so depressing, then got sooooo cute, thank you for the chapter

Wow really nice since there aren't that many percy/reyna stories

Great story so far! Love this pairing!

Good Luck For Your Exams!

Your writing of chapter one was beautiful.

I'm not a english-speaker but I have read this chapter and your later note and I was like "He/She has changed his/her style? Why?" I mean, I would love be able to write like you in you first chapter XDD

I honestly think that this was a huge improvement from the previous style. I don't remember much of what the older one was like (I remember the general feel and flow) but when I started reading this one, I thought, "I like this." So good job. Hope you can continue to write more because I absolutely loved it.

It's always adorable how... tsundere Reyna can be. She presents a hard exterior fit to be a Praetor of Rome, and yet influenced by Percy's charms. Best thing is that Percy would be good for her, teaching her to relax a little despite all the responsibilities and problems that she is burdened with. A promising start, and am glad that you are just editing Looking forward for more :)

Holy shitballs! Scrap me off the walls! I thought this was over, and boy oh boy, I am so glad you're not discontinuing this. I'm one of the rare Preyna (do they even have a ship name? o.o) shippers.

Anyhow, I look forward to more of your work! Take your time.
Keep me posted, yeah?

Jupiter.

Ohwell, it was good when it lasted. Really had me thinking, "after all this time?" Oops, wrong fandom. Anyway, I would still thank you for this story that once curled my lips into a smile, enough for me to favorite it.